An Alternate Thing - Story Five

[jlrpuck_fic]

Title: The Bait
Rating: M
Author: jlrpuck
Disclaimer: Characters from Blackpool and Doctor Who are the property of the BBC, and are used with the greatest of love and respect; no profit is intended from the writing or sharing of this story.
Summary: What if Peter Carlisle's mum hadn't died from an overdose?
Authors Notes: Sometimes, begging *does*

Comments

[zotlot]

Awww, I love these two! That was so moving... :)

[jlrpuck_fic]

Thank you.

[crimedoc1]

THANK YOU!

*dances happily around the room*

I obviously excel at begging, if this is the result. ;-) This is totally sweet and lovely, and makes me so very happy for the two of them. I am constantly amazed at how you have two totally different Peters and Roses but write both pairings so perfectly.

I will try my best to hold off begging for even MORE stories from you for... oooh... maybe a week? Would a week be long enough?

*sends big hugs of thanks*

[jlrpuck_fic]

You're welcome :)

This is totally sweet and lovely, and makes me so very happy for the two of them.

I'm glad! There's a lot of hope, in this piece.

I am constantly amazed at how you have two totally different Peters and Roses but write both pairings so perfectly.

They're just...different, in my mind. I mean, they're the same, but they're not. (translation: compartmentalization--it's not just for bad memories!)

Would a week be long enough?

I fear you'll have to wait longer. I only have one story left in the hopper, and I won't want to post until I have at least another one tucked away for a rainy day (or an emergency).

I hope your mom is doing better!

[wildwinterwitch]

Yay! What an unexpected treat to come home to. Thank you.

[jlrpuck_fic]

You're welcome. Happy Friday!

[angelfireeast]

That was lovely! I love Rose's relation to the ring missing, she's afraid it doesn't mean what she wants it too. Also I like that Rose has been aboving his left side because of the ring. It must be so hard, you're with someone and there a rememder he might not be ready to move on yet.

I love this AU:D

[jlrpuck_fic]

she's afraid it doesn't mean what she wants it too.

That she is.

It must be so hard, you're with someone and there a rememder he might not be ready to move on yet.

Exactly right. That ring has really been a barrier to them moving on, for various reasons--but now it's gone. :)

[salimali]

What a pleasant suprise this afternoon!(I read the comments to ASTG and laughed when crimedoc1 was begging- didn't realise you'd succumed to the beg!)
Just beautiful, its great how you can take two characters and make them the same but different. Now if only Original Rose and Peter could get their living arrangements sorted just as easily :o)

[jlrpuck_fic]

didn't realise you'd succumed to the beg!

It doesn't happen very often, that's for sure. But, sometimes, I can be cajoled. ;)

Just beautiful, its great how you can take two characters and make them the same but different.

Thank you! It helps that they really are kind of separate in my mind. (ah, imagination--I should never have learned how to unleash you!)