A Swimming Thing
The sun had been up for an hour by the time Peter was able to make it downstairs for his swim. It wasn’t Rose’s fault-she’d been asleep the entire time-but rather the fault of his bloody mobile, which had had the temerity to actually work in Croy. That had been the deal he’d made with Elias, though-he could sneak off for a long
(
Read more... )
Comments 83
I don't think I could ever grow tired of how playful they can be with one another. Though I admit my first thought was how much that salt water was going to hurt if they tried it. I was also amused because my own husband had a tendency to not worry about clothes before we had the child, so that resonated and made Peter seem all the more real. Thank you so much for sharing it.
Reply
I don't think I could, either ;)
Though I admit my first thought was how much that salt water was going to hurt if they tried it.
Ah, yeah. Even in PW, certain...issues...apply.
my own husband had a tendency to not worry about clothes before we had the child, so that resonated and made Peter seem all the more real.
Thank you! Peter's going to have to learn to wear at least *something* around the house, once Lucy's grown past baby-stage *g*
Reply
Beautiful, hot, funny and real. In other words, wonderful as always. Unfortunately, as I'm away for the holiday I only have my crackberry with me, so I will leave a more complete review first thing tomorrow. In the meantime just know that the image of Peter rising out the ocean in all his glory has cured me of any residual thoughts of that wetsuit. (Although you're right that he didn't look have bad with the hood off and his hair all crazy)
Ok, time to get back back to the family - who all think I'm working right now. If only they knew! *blushes*
Reply
You mean, you escaped the horrors of your job, even for only a short time? HURRAH!
By the by, this one didn't get posted on Teaspoon. :)
In the meantime just know that the image of Peter rising out the ocean in all his glory has cured me of any residual thoughts of that wetsuit.
Ah. Mission accomplished, then.
*g*
Reply
Yes, for a short while at least, only to come back and find out someone quit Friday night and I have to clean up his mess.
By the by, this one didn't get posted on Teaspoon.
Then I'm doubly glad I've been sneaking over here for a while now, and finally got up the courage to post reviews here.
Will you be posting the sequel to Teaspoon, or will you keep it exclusive to this site?
Ah. Mission accomplished, then.
Most assuredly. *G*
Reply
BOO!
Will you be posting the sequel to Teaspoon, or will you keep it exclusive to this site?
I've been waffling on that particular question: As it stands, the sequel is so Peter-heavy that I'm not entirely sure it meets the Teaspoon posting requirements. And I live in fear of violating the rules over there! If I *do* wind up posting it only here, I'll find a way to drop a line into the A/N of the last ficlet before it starts posting.
Reply
Reply
Exactly right :)
Reply
“No, it’s just, well...you’re naked. Outside.”
oh, but you love it Rose. Plus, it's not like he's suggesting the two of you start a burlesque show or something. this is "public" nudity with much caution.
"hurrying to get her to the sea before she used any of her training to escape."
would there ever be a time when she did perhaps use that? I know some of it becomes reflex like, so maybe he accidentally does something to trigger it?
Thank you for indulging your bunnies!
Reply
They're tenacious, are Peter and Rose.
oh, but you love it Rose.
She totally does :)
would there ever be a time when she did perhaps use that?
I think, possibly, if he were trying to wake her up from a nightmare.
Reply
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment