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FIC: The Trick Is to Keep Breathing (Harry Potter, various ships, R) 3/10

Aug 24, 2011 07:29

Author: Clio
Title: The Trick Is to Keep Breathing, Chapter 3: Michaelmas
Pairing: Draco/Ginny, Seamus/Dean, Ron/Padma, Pansy/Parvati, Harry/Hermione
Category: Mystery/romance
Rating: R
Summary: Three years on, the second war still casts a long shadow. When facing challenges like a compulsive addiction, a baffling mystery, a life changing ( Read more... )

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mmichelle August 24 2011, 12:45:00 UTC
I feel like every review I leave for this is super repetitive, but: I just really love this. It's so refreshing to read HP fic that's just about friendships and relationships and not trying to take itself too seriously - which isn't to say that there aren't serious parts of this. It's just a breath of fresh air.

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mmichelle August 24 2011, 12:46:11 UTC
PS - I hope you had a great birthday!

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jlh September 6 2011, 20:40:48 UTC
Thanks, I totally did!

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jlh September 6 2011, 20:40:32 UTC
Thank you! I like relationships more than anything else so I just self-indulgently keep writing them, and I'm lucky people want to read them as well.

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lash_larue August 24 2011, 20:44:47 UTC
Thoroughly enjoyable, this feels very real!
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jlh September 6 2011, 20:41:09 UTC
Such a great compliment, thank you!!

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gretagarbled August 25 2011, 11:58:18 UTC
oooh I really like this. You have this knack for getting their voices just right. It's lovelylovelylovely :)

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jlh September 6 2011, 20:41:49 UTC
Thanks so much! It's a lot harder coming from a book--so much easier to get the voices when you can really hear them, as in a tv show or movie, so I'm glad they sound right to you!

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misscake August 26 2011, 12:25:10 UTC
I am really loving how you're building this story. Also, I really want someone to draw the circus wedding!

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jlh September 6 2011, 20:43:21 UTC
I'm so glad because the pacing and when to reveal things was the most tricky part of the story, definitely. So thanks!!

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amyamy September 6 2011, 14:21:24 UTC
Oh, Harry and Hermione just make my heart ache and want to cuddle them both. I also still completely love Padma and Ginny shopping together, with Ginny's little twinges of self-consciousness and the question about marrying someone for sauce spoons.

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jlh September 6 2011, 20:45:20 UTC
I would totally marry someone for sauce spoons.

Thanks!

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