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jkay1980

A Case of Identity - Chapter sixteen (16/23)

Jul 10, 2012 16:23

Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Chapter 8 Chapter 9 Chapter 10 Chapter 11 Chapter 12 Chapter 13 Chapter 14 Chapter 15 part one Chapter 15 part two Chapter 16 Chapter 17 Chapter 18 Chapter 19 Chapter 20 Chapter 21 Chapter 22 Chapter 23
Dawn was breaking. The sun had not yet risen completely and ( Read more... )

1000-5000 words, category - friendship, sherlock(bbc), slash, fanworks-fic, fandom, livejournal, sherlock/john, r, category - romance

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tempest_gypsy July 10 2012, 14:53:46 UTC

EeeeeeEEEEeeeeEEEEE!
I really do love this and I'm always so excited when you post a new chapter. Most of the Sherlock/John stories I've read are about awkward situations forcing them to express their feelings for each other or, more commonly, forcing them to express their lust for each other, which may or may not lead to expressing love. It's all denial denial denial SEXPLOSION what-do-we-do-now?I am thrilled that you have written John as becoming aware of his feelings and choosing to act on them, as opposed to the other way around. And the slow build of the relationship and romance is being done so well ( ... )

janine_moony July 10 2012, 15:08:01 UTC

KHJSDKLHS;LFHKLSFHKF YOU CAN'T STOP THERE!! This is soooooo goooood!

ariadnechan July 10 2012, 21:24:28 UTC

You are so evil! I really want to know what Sherlock was going to say....
But you are brilliant!

I love new selfconfident John and i know for his easy succes with women he is very witty and charming in his flirting, so making more brainy flirting will be only more encouraging! (not that women don't deserve brainy, but if John was courting Irene he would use similar technics, but he obviously was not interested and he was not into bdsm)

He even was able to confront Howard and take some info from him, i love John this way!

Please Sherlock be seriusly in love with John

And you please tell me you have the other chapter, because i'm in physical pain!

talimenios79 July 12 2012, 06:00:35 UTC

This is a really great story. I am loving it.

rte_175 July 12 2012, 11:34:32 UTC

You're stopping there?!!! Nooo!!!! GREAT update! Love all the sexual tension and John's plan to intellectually--and physically--seduce Sherlock. Yum. Waiting with bated breath for Sherlock's letter... :-)