calm down, you two

Jan 03, 2005 15:00

So, I just wrote three pages of pretty explicit Magneto/Pyro sex and I feel a little guilty. Because it's pretty explicit. And I was going for a subtle, tension-filled encounter in Erik's shadowy bedroom in the middle of the night.

I'm afraid if I keep writing, they're just going to have more sex and I'll never get the subtlety back in the story

god loves man kills, whatever remains however improbable

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penknife January 3 2005, 21:33:55 UTC
I hate it when they do that.

And I really want to see the story now. *is incorrigible*

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jjtaylor January 3 2005, 21:44:54 UTC
Yes, they're being very bad. I usually don't even write explicit sex. One minute, John was standing at Erik's bedroom door and the next minute, they were both on the bed. Having sex.

And I really want to see the story now. *is incorrigible*

Oh, thanks! I think I've given in and I'll just have to save the subtlety for another time.

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