Breakfast at Harvey's

[jjoanne]

With my tray, I glanced around the small no smoking section. There were only three men sitting alone but it appeared crowded. There they sat, each with an empty coffee cup in hand and a closed newspaper resting under their other hand. Obviously they were done and were just killing time. There were no spare newspapers in sight. Damn it, I

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[inspectorjury]

This is sooooooooo good!!! I loved it!!!!

[jjoanne]

Why, thank you. Who needs to write fiction when you find yourself in situations like this.

[kanga2roos]

I agree... this was great reading. :)

-kanga

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[jjoanne]

thanks!

[evilmomlady]

I read this when you posted it, and was going to comment then, but events overtook me, and this somehow got into the background of my life, but I kept thinking about it. I think this is so good. I just love it. The way you pulled me into Harvey's was amazing. Everything is perfect, including the ending. Have you shown this to your writing class tutor? I hope you don't mind me commenting on your writing from time to time. I feel emboldened to do so since you are taking a writing class, but still I sometimes wonder if I should. However, I don't feel critical in a negative way towards anything you, or anybody else for that matter, has written, since I enjoy the way all of my LJ friends write.

I'm sorry I haven't been commenting on your LJ much lately, but I have been reading it, and I'm always interested in what you have to say (and the way you say it:) )

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[jjoanne]

I don't mind your commments on my writing at all. I welcome them all, good and bad.

I have not shown this one to my instructor. She is busy enough reviewing our regular class assignments....another reason why I would love comments from you and other readers here.