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jjblue1

Fanfic: Shards - Part 3

Aug 27, 2007 03:21

Title: "Shards - Part 3"
Author: J.J.
Warning: It's an AU BASED ON THE MANGA, it probably contains some OOCness, uses Japanese words and includes some spoilers.
Notes: I wanted to make a fic. I ended up making this weird things instead…
Disclaimer:
"Tokyo Babylon" and "X" belong to Clamp. I'm merely using their characters because I love them... ( Read more... )

fic: shards

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jjblue1 August 28 2007, 01:57:15 UTC

^_____^
I'm glad you did!
Despite everything they're a cute couple!

anonymous August 27 2007, 16:50:10 UTC

They finally out of that Hospital!
Can't wait to see how life will go on in the Sakurazuka's house. ^______^ It's good for once to see Subaru playing hard to get! (Kind of)
Really good!
Hugs
Moko

jjblue1 August 28 2007, 01:59:55 UTC

They had to get out of that hospital soon or judgement day would see them still in it... ^_-
Mn... life in the Sakurazuka's house isn't exactly easy... and poor Subaru's not really playing hard to get. He wants to be gotten but he had no idea Seishiro wants him (actually Seishiro hasn't figured it out either so you can't really blame Subaru) and he's just mostly confused and afraid that, trusting Seishiro, he would end up hurt again... and he's also very depressed...

ruthk August 27 2007, 17:17:29 UTC

I can understand how that story is giving you hell. I find it very hard to imagine whether there is anywhere to go for those two, given their current situation. I like the "mini" chapters, giving different impressions.
On a different note: Is there any more "Game over" coming up?

jjblue1 August 28 2007, 02:10:50 UTC

Actually, more than where are they going to do the hard part is to characterize them well. X doesn't really spend much time on them and it's really easy to slip into fan-characterization ( ... )

abe_chan September 3 2007, 18:07:16 UTC

So, Seishiro is going to keep his Subaru-kitten home? ♥
I like how they are coming close little by little, I just hope that no one is going to do something stupid before getting here.

“Humanity’s dying,” Seishiro corrected him. “Who know, maybe due to this they’ll even do me a discount…”
Oh Sei-chan you sociopathic you!

We will see someone else now that they are out of the hospital? I just die to know the reaction of Kamui (the short one) when he'll know. :D

jjblue1 September 3 2007, 20:41:48 UTC

Seishiro kind of wants to keep Subaru under control until he figures out what to do with him.
Well... Sei-chan doesn't care much about people...
Subaru will meet Kamui but that's in the future...