Dead Bodies, Death and Killing (chap 4)

[jishu]

Title:  Dead Bodies, Death and Killing
Pairing:  Onew/Taemin, slight Onew/Jonghyun in this chap.

Chapter I:  Fascination of Dead Bodies

Chapter II:  Killing a Mermaid

Chapter III:  Killing An Ex-Boyfriend

CHAPTER IV:  Killing A Possibly New Friend

It's been all over the news about the missing dead bodies.  Apparently, somebody had been digging graves,

Comments

hi! new reader here :D

[playingods]

holy! i just read this series in one go and oh my god i really love this! your dark!ontae is just so fascinating. and jonghyun... i feel sorry for him, but it's okay, as long as jinki is having fun killing people, then i wouldn't mind XD

AND! I LOVE BOTTOM!JINKI AND TOP!TAEMIN XD

nice update!

Re: hi! new reader here :D

[jishu]

It always makes me happy to have a new reader ^^ Thank you so much for reading this <3

[candiiez]

at first i was like "OH GOD i like this story!!" until i read what Taemin said in the coffin.

"I also had sex with some of the dead bodies in the funeral parlor."

*shivers* dude, thats gross. i mean : you kiss dead bodies and its now that u tell me you had sex with some ? wooh...
after that, i had to tell someone cuz i was so traumatized.
i choose my bigsister, who had a nightmare just before i told her(kekeke, im so bad)

and lol jonghyun appears but dies before being important in the story ~ i wonder if you'll came Minho appear too...:D
jinki, you throw well. i'd be proud to use a sword THAT well.

poor jinki, his father was a great asshole.
wah i like bottom!jinki and top!taemin ~
lets see if taemin can make Jinki come!!

[jishu]

It's called necrophilia. I hope your sister didn't have another nightmare then ^^; Everybody seems to be pointing out the sex part and bottom!jinki and top!taemin~ now, I feel a bit pressured for the next chapter X_x but still, I'm happy and very thankful to readers like you <3

[shineecandy]

I knew it was jonghyun even before you mentioned it!!

Taemin seriously scares the sweet Jesus out of me! He scares me more than Jinki. At least Jinki has at least a reason to kill people. It's like his revenge. But Taemin, he is just plain crazy! kissing and having sex with dead people? wow! that blew my mind. He doesn't even feel sorry towards his boyfriend. tsk!

anyway, now that i think about it. How come JinKi doesn't allow Taemin to kill people? hmmn...

i'm really so in love with this fic omg!! i wish i can write!!!

[jishu]

But Taemin killed the mermaid XD;; Jinki killed key for revenge. And in this chapter, Jinki really thought that Jonghyun might be a new friend but changed his mind and killed him. I guess Taemin hadn't had the chance to kill for a while now. Maybe in the net chap~ ^^

Thanks for reading <3

[shineecandy]

yeah but it's super natural you know... i mean the "choking kid" doesn't really count... yeah.. let Taemin kill a person next chap.. oh my god!

[19izzati]

OMG~~~ why you kill jonghyun...i love jonghyun sooo much...if jonghyun still alive maybe he will be partner with minho...or someone...they will be sidekicked...but Onew easily get tired with jonghyun...that sooo fast...again...i read this in my sleep deprieved state...ahhh~~~~ this will be sweet nightmare to me *smile widely* Like I said...this fic is getting darker...ooohhhh...I want chappie 5 a.s.ap....hahahaha XD *Dark Laugh*

[jishu]

I'm in the process of writing chapter 5 and it's almost done~ maybe I'll post it tomorrow. Thanks for reading and sorry for killing Jonghyun. I only plan on focusing OnTae. ^^;

[shana31]

Hey new reader here ^^
I've just read from chapter 1 and oh my god I like them so much! (nope, I'm not creepy I promise)
Only Minho haven't come out so far
Can't wait for chapter 5!

[jishu]

I have a plan for Minho but I don't know if I'll go through with it~ XD but he definitely will NOT show up in the next chapter~ XD Thanks for reading <3