Comments | jishu: Quiet Places chap. 5

jishu

Quiet Places chap. 5

Jul 27, 2008 19:23

Theme: Quiet Places
Pairing: Yesung/ Ryeowook

Chapter 5

It was because of the cell phone that Ryeowook and Yesung’s relationship started.
Will it also be because of the cell phone that their relationship will end? That’s what Yesung thought as he handed a new brand of cell phone to Ryeowook. That’s what Ryeowook thought as he accepted the new cell ( Read more... )

100 fic challenge, yehwook, sj: yesung, sj: ryeowook, quiet places

Comments 58

tealsilver July 27 2008, 12:08:21 UTC

SPOT~!

Love it. Love it. BABY KYU'S HERE!!!~~

Over all, it's doing awesome. Love that slight KyuChul there. KYUCHUL IS LOVEEE~~~ XD

Jealous!Yesung is hot. LOl.

jishu July 27 2008, 12:53:06 UTC

Yeah~ I decided to put up Kyuhyun here because I don't think I can write a fic featuring Kyuhyun anytime soon for you.

loud_speaker July 27 2008, 12:26:29 UTC

Wook should have spend a much more time with Yesung, like Sungmin said, especially when Yesung felt jealousy for first time he saw Kyu. But you know, jealous!Yesung is really hot.

Hanchul's here too :D! NOW I love this fic even more (you used mine both OTP <3)

Love this chap~~~ keep writing~~

jishu July 27 2008, 12:56:11 UTC

it's only mentioned!Hanchul thou~
thanks for reading ^_^

loud_speaker July 27 2008, 14:59:09 UTC

Haha, it's enough for me, to know that they're together (I'm weird like that) d(^w^)

mikudaisuki July 27 2008, 13:31:44 UTC

A squabbling yewook is so adorable >.< they are so obvious!!! silly boys!!
when kyu enterd the scene i thought there's gonna be a love triangle thing and i'm so glad that u didn't make it that way *phew*
Pls patch them up quick!!! *dies*

jishu July 27 2008, 13:37:14 UTC

I did think of a love triangle but it would make the fic longer XD. And Kyuhyun seem to be an innocent "Chinese" guy here so stealing Ryeowook doesn't seem to fit his role. lolz

anonymous July 27 2008, 14:00:58 UTC

Yay! you managed to update it! HAPPY! And they're having thier first break-up! They're so CUTE! Please patch them up... wonder what Wookie will do... is there gonna be smut? I know you said that you can't write smut... but you can always do a half smut... *wriggles eyebrows*
Gawd! Can't wait for the next update! but of course I'll wait... TT__TT

dream4fatgirl July 27 2008, 14:02:26 UTC

Hehehehe... that was me! I'm such a DORK! Forgot to logg in got to excited when I saw it... ^__^

jishu July 27 2008, 14:06:35 UTC

Hahahaha!!! I was going to ask who you were and that you sound someone familiar XD. I'm afraid the story will be ruined if I write smut? Um..I'll try? XD I'm currently writing the next chapter. I've written 3 sentences so far. XD

dream4fatgirl July 28 2008, 00:53:04 UTC

YES! JISHU HWAITING! ^__^