wow...this is so...idn't know how to explain it but i'm glad i read this thing...here...i don't know what to quote but the flow is perfect and the battles are perfect and the focus are perfect and there is nothing i can complain about. wait, i'm just keyboardsmashing right now because, xiuhun!!! medic xiu and his charming swordskills and sehun's insecurities and chansoo....all the other characters are A+++ and this is must have cost a huge effort and wow...
I have read through all of this and I am so in love with it. You have built such a great AU that I was actually sad when the end came. Just like the endless adventures the crew can face as immortals, I just wanted more adventures to read.
I love how Sehun's emotions have him immediately enticed by Minseok, but he needs a little more time to definitely name them and then some more to dare doing something about them. Clearly Minseok is more mature, but he does not act above Sehun, he protects him without making it appear like Sehun is unable to hold himself up at all.
There are just so many things I could rant on about, the cuteness of Sehun's love for Minseok in all his actions or how endearing Minseok's concern for Sehun is, that they both share the pain of losing a sibling and understand the guilt they felt. But eh. Just have this comment. I really loved this.
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i'm seriously blown away...
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I love how Sehun's emotions have him immediately enticed by Minseok, but he needs a little more time to definitely name them and then some more to dare doing something about them. Clearly Minseok is more mature, but he does not act above Sehun, he protects him without making it appear like Sehun is unable to hold himself up at all.
There are just so many things I could rant on about, the cuteness of Sehun's love for Minseok in all his actions or how endearing Minseok's concern for Sehun is, that they both share the pain of losing a sibling and understand the guilt they felt. But eh. Just have this comment. I really loved this.
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(´ ▽｀).。ｏ♡
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