Need You, Want You

[jinsung]

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And I thought I hated short fics...actually I kind of do, but I wrote this many weeks ago one evening after a day at school. Pen on foolscap. Just because the urge to do so took me.

Kind of like a story of hope for the future. I don't (want to) do empty angst...ugh. Life's so full of that already and it gets you nowhere.

Comments

[gnashingbodkin]

This is gorgeous. I love all the intricate little details that are present, yet it manages to stay simple and heartwarming.

I've always thought the Yunho/Yoochun relationship is intriguing, partially because they are considered the 'manly men' of the group. I like to see this side to them.

[jinsung]

ok, internet ate up reply

thanks for reading. comments brighten up my day.

it's interesting, but the "'manly men' of the group" thing is not something i'm too convinced of. the five all seem like a bunch of guys, just very sophisticated and urbane. actually changmin and yoochun seem the most manly and junsu's scary.

[gnashingbodkin]

I agree - I think it's quite clear that each of them have varied-sides, whether you would consider 'manly', or simply boyish, however there is that common (how should I say... femininity?) present that Asian women tend to find appealing. I suppose you need to balance the two when writing about their personalities, which you seem to have managed perfectly well.

Changmin and Yoochun are totally boyish and dorky. I think Junsu is pretty masculine too, it just gets bogged down by the endless teasing.

[naeve14]

This is so very Yunchun, the subtlety of their dynamic, it was like the love is there, but not really, very vague and exclusive. The very quality that made me oh so head over heels with this pairing, I think I can never have enough of them.

I love this, love the style of your writing, and love you for keep writing my OTP when most of writers out there tend to not paying attention to this lovely pair. Thank you so much! m(_ _)m

[aniprincess_13]

My heart kinda ached a bit in the last part... When he wanted something but is stopping himself.. This is cute with the way Yunho cares just so much but I feel kinda bad for him...

[anael777]

aww so romantic and sweet ^^ I love the way Yunho cares for our lost Chunnie ^^

[dilovesyunjae]

awww.....nice