Lies [part one]

Sep 28, 2009 17:01


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Dedicated to jorge_callas, who edited and helped to shape this piece. Thanks for being my friend and providing guidance all the way.

Lies )

yoochun, lies, yunho, fanfic, multi-part

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jinsung September 28 2009, 14:56:19 UTC
I can put it up in less than a week...it's all done and ready to go, just that not the whole story's done so maybe I want to do some tweaking. Thanks for reading.

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miaozi15926 September 28 2009, 22:50:13 UTC
can't wait for the next part!!

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jinsung September 29 2009, 03:51:44 UTC
Thanks for reading.

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naeve14 September 29 2009, 09:12:25 UTC
Very very interesting read! I like the way you made Yoochun's identity as ambiguous even to the readers although the ambiguity only intended to Yunho and you slowly open up the curtain so as to shed the light for Yunho.

The way you write on Yunho's confession was so sweet. True, action speaks louder than words. Very brilliant!

And I think, the way Yunho responded to the realization on Yoochun's true character, seemed mirroring his own frustration, for he already falling for Yoochun... Although what he said was intended to cut, to hurt Yoochun, but the one that was affected, that got hurt and cut even deeper, was he himself. How ironic....

Pleaase do update a.s.a.p

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jinsung September 29 2009, 15:06:39 UTC
Thanks for telling me your thoughts. It means a lot to me.

The confession...was meant to be on the emotional side when I first wrote it, but afterward I felt that it looked like an omen of doom or ill judgement. Either ways just a reflection of Yunho's mind.

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naeve14 October 10 2009, 12:28:35 UTC
eeerrrmmmm.... Update?

Please?!

Coz I am really curios of what's gonna happened next!

Hhhhhheeeee..... *hides*

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jinsung October 10 2009, 14:35:54 UTC
Oh dear. I'm really sorry! I'm still tweaking. I'll keep you in mind. And thanks for the reminder.

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