I Feel Like I Win When I Lose

[jinkibumiminho]

Title: I Feel Like I Win When I Lose
Author: mimi_oly
Rating: NC-17 (language, sex)
Pairing/Focus: Minho/Onew
Genre: Humor, Friendship, Smut
Words: 3200
Summary: Minho and Onew play a new variation of their dangerous game after their latest fan event.

Comments

[g_odalisque13]

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goddamn. i can't.
this...seriously, my brain is kinda mush right now.
but i loved the competitiveness that yielded to real feelings. minho calling onew 'baby' was so so so sweet.
and there were so many UNF moments that i don't even know what to quote, so i will quote this instead:
Poultry was mocked.
XD god i honesly burst out laughing when i read that. and now i'm giggling again.

loved this so much!!! ♥

[jinkibumiminho]

Oh, sweetie, you are one of my faves, so lovely words from you are...[blushes]
I had fun imagining these two wresting around, and that was one of my favorites lines as well.
Thanks for stopping by!

[oneu]

I don't usually read NC-17 (but apparently this was REALLY what I needed today) *_* it dfhSJKD idk made me feel ten times better than I was? (sorry kind of in the middle of a crisis here ;/) so this was the perfect distraction ♥

And I'd always thought it would be awesome to write read a fic where Minho came too soon and left Onew hanging 8D so that made me happy. And jst yeah this was totally awesome *_____* loved it!
♥

[jinkibumiminho]

I'm glad this cheered you up!
Something inside of me needed to take Minho's ego down a notch (I get a little tired of reading the usual simultaneous climax scene, and I thought this was more realistic, especially for their first time). But I think Onew enjoyed himself here...at least I enjoyed picturing him!
Thanks for the lovely comments!

[oneu]

yeah I keep imagining something like that - Minho coming too soon LOL yeah I guess so.

no problem ♥

[min7girl]

"Sports teams were denigrated. Poultry was mocked."

That line had my in stitches. As did the 2PM reference.

I have always respected wrestling in any form but I have also always felt that as a sport it bordered on gay porn. Guys or girls rolling around on the ground pinning each other till someone counts off to a number or until someone gives up. Yes there is strength and technical know-how, but there is also sweaty bodies and grunting and asses in faces. ::shakes head:::

It is also similar to other animals in nature to control for dominance(alpha male fights). I am shocked I don't see more of it in fanfics. It works in so beautifully.

Well done and thank you.

[jinkibumiminho]

I'm so glad you liked it, and yes, the poultry mocking was certainly a dirty trick. 2pm was the easy one...can you find ABBA and SHINee?
I also see an alpha male thing going on between these two.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting!

[acrosstherug]

i havent even read to the end but Poultry was mocked. i fucking cried.

[jinkibumiminho]

That seems to be the winning line -- any dirty trick to win!
Enjoy, and thanks for stopping by!

[gurkl]

i should not have read this on the bus, the old man next to me is now glaring since i keep giggling and flailing
This is hilarious and so fucking sexy, i would quote but technology is currently preventing me
Thank you for sharing, this proper had me hurr hurring

[jinkibumiminho]

That's the reaction I was hoping for...hurrrrrr
Unf + giggles.
Thanks for commenting!