Loyalty: PG-13; ninja!OTPs galore

[jinkibumiminho]

Title: Loyalty
Author: mimi_oly
Rating: PG-13 (language, mature theme)
Pairing/Focus: ninja OTPs galore
Word count: 3900
Genre: Bandfic, slice of life, drama/angst
Summary: Jonghyun makes choices; Jinki deals with the consequences.
Author’s note: I began this right after SHINee’s first concert, before Jonghyun’s foot/ankle surgery. Before I knew the extent

Comments

[oconje]

This is soooo good! OMG, I also wondered if the reason Jonghyun and Jinki have been so distant in recent times was due to Sekyung because of the timing! Also, the whole time Jinki was helping Jonghyun in London, especially the shower scene, I thought they would start to make out, lol! I love your fics!

[jinkibumiminho]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. The first part sat and sat in my folder and I didn't know what to do with it. Then Jonghyun was again mysteriously absent in London...and the break-up was announced the next day, which made me imagine that he had drowned his sorrows in alcohol in London. I remembered that Jinki had said he liked SSK on Hello Baby...and the "Jinki is a two-timing player" ending insisted on being written.

It was really hard to stay away from smut, but I hope your brain enjoyed some "Jinki in nothing but a towel" time! Thanks for reading!

[min7girl]

OK. Ninja is ninja. This thing has ninja hookups for everyone. If you have a pairing you like, it is covered!!!! Just to do that you are a wondrous person! Thank you!!!

Of course I glommed on to the ontae, Taemin needing to be forcibly removed form jinki's bed after not leaving his side through the hospital trip and being in tears the whole time. oh yeah.

But you have Minkey. Onho, Jongho, 2min(that I didn't want to puke at-thumbs up), Jongkey, and jongyu.

And then you ended it all kinds of..I had to read that ending 3 times to believe what I was reading. Just damn!

[jinkibumiminho]

Wait, what? JongKey? Nooooooo!!!! Well, I suppose if you consider attempted murder a variation on OTP. I did purposely have Onew and Minho have some kind of connection with each of memebers, along with the, as someone (maybe you?) said, the "clothing optional wing of the dorm" JongHo dudes vs. the OnTaeKey bunnies.

I felt unsure about the ending. I thought I got dangerously close to fluffy with Jjong at the end. The whole Jinki with SeKyung thing snuck up on me after the rest of the story was finished. I've always felt a bit bad about the "I saw her first" idea, that it seemed IRL that Jjong cockblocked Jinki. Who knows? Then I just needed the guts to make Jinki a bad guy. Ouch.

Thanks for the lovely comment, I'm glad you liked it!

[stjoan4eva]

Oh. My. God.

I...

This....

*gives up on words and just gives a standing ovation*

[jinkibumiminho]

YOU!!!!
I miss you.
I'm so glad you liked it!

[kyttenfae]

Totally did not see that ending coming *giggles* But yeah, loved how there really are a billion otps scattered about! <333 Seriously, you wove everything together really well. *bounces and rereads*

[jinkibumiminho]

{happy bunny wiggles nose at you}
It was so hard to go with that ending. I just can't see Jinki doing that IRL, but the plot bunnies wanted it that way. Thanks for reading!

[linnhe]

yes at Minho's text remaining polite and Key just cussing all over the place :D

Sir Trips-a-Lot
omg why.

It was a testament to the depth of Key’s anger that Minho had to struggle to keep Key from ripping Jonghyun’s head off.
oh, now I'm tense
Key is so angry :/

Minho-ah
I thought you'd find it interesting that when a name ends in a vowel you use the -yah suffix rather than the -ah suffix
so Taemin-ah and Minho-yah
you can read more about it here

*forgets to quote, too involved*

THE ENDING
WHAT
WHATTT

[jinkibumiminho]

Love your Bert gif...
I had to struggle to turn Jinki into an asshole at the end, because I don't see him as capable of this IRL, but hey, he did have "dibs" on her, as crappy as that sounds.
The song...hah! I never thought to put them together. Wicked.
And the thing with name endings...I love the post you sent, and the stupid thing is...I knew this and got it wrong anyway, so thanks for the heads-up.
Thanks for reading!