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jingy5

Move With Me: chpt 5

Oct 18, 2008 23:01

A/N: This chapter is dedicated for the memory of my Great-Uncle Joe. You will be dearly missed good man…

It would be safe to assume that Fuji was a little apprehensive about the party; not that he was antisocial but because he knew Tezuka was. The captain/coach/trainer never seemed to want to join in on their ‘team-building’ activities also ( Read more... )

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tacuma811 October 19 2008, 19:04:57 UTC

OMG! I was so happy when I read about Tezuka and Fuji dancing. It's awesome!
I love that Tezuka was rolling his hips against Fuji's and Fuji laid his hand against Tezuka's chest!
But the end...O_O You have to update soon, I really want to know what will happen next!
I really love this fic!! This was not awful material at all!!

I'm sorry to hear about your great uncle and the father of your close friend. I hope you feel a little bit better

jingy5 October 20 2008, 02:11:04 UTC

lol i'll try to update this week..the party isnt over yet lol i'm really glad u enjoyed this chpt.. i was kinda worried it wasnt up to par

tacuma811 October 20 2008, 17:30:21 UTC

No worries about this chap, it's awesome!!
Glad that the party isn't over! Will good things happen in the next chapter?

jingy5 October 20 2008, 19:02:43 UTC

yes yes YES!!! lol very good things lol well at least to me.. u might want to murder me when u finish reading it tho

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elysis October 20 2008, 02:52:48 UTC

Oh...I like the TeFu moment. It's cute that Tezuka smirked because Fuji answered with the usually "Ah" of his xD. Well, I'm now imagining Fuji with white silk mandarin collared shirt, he must looked gorgeous.

I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Especially with all the drama and stuff ^^. Please update soon cause I'm really curious about the person on the other line of Tezuka's phone ^^;.

Btw, I'm sorry about your great uncle and your friend's father. I hope they'll RIP.

jingy5 October 20 2008, 03:43:44 UTC

thanks alot lol i was nervous about the TeFu scene *sigh* glad u liked it lol...i;ll try to update sometime this week.. the party was too fun to write for it to be over

thanks for your well wishes

paranoid_fridge October 20 2008, 17:50:45 UTC

TezuFuji dance scene - yay!
(over-)protective Eiji - yaay!
Anticipated drama - yaaay!

In short: brilliant chapter; and I had much fun reading. I liked the way you added descriptions here and there - made the scenes much more plastic and also the way you had the characters interact.

And last but not least, of course I'm dying of curiosity to find out just who Tezuka was talking to on the phone and how the story is going to play out... ^_^

jingy5 October 20 2008, 19:02:00 UTC

lol lol i'm over flowing with joy lol.. i really thought this part of the party wouldnt cut it but it seems i'm too much of a critic on myself -thats good right?- anywho... i'll try to update sometime this week but u wont be finding out Tez's mystery caller yet -grins evilly-