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Prompt #108: you can hear it in the silence

Dec 23, 2016 02:15

Prompt: #108
From: Secret Santa
Title: you can hear it in the silence
Word Count: 4,200
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Lu Han loves coffee. Sehun thinks this means he loves Starbucks.
Warning/s: occasional swearing, cheesiness

( It seems everyone had underestimated how lovestruck Lu Han was. Including his best friend. )

1st christmas, rating: pg13, length:1000-10000

Comments 16

anonymous December 23 2016, 10:34:16 UTC

yeah this masterpiece is definitely my cup of tea <3

selu coffeeshop!au's will never get old

untitledminds January 5 2017, 01:18:09 UTC

thank you so much for reading! i'm glad you enjoyed it :)))

❤️❤️❤️❤️ anonymous December 23 2016, 13:43:39 UTC

Can I cry on how beautiful and warm this is? I like the pace and ambiance of the story ❤️👏🏻👏🏻 Thank you :)

RE: ❤️❤️❤️❤️ untitledminds January 5 2017, 01:19:45 UTC

ahhh thank you so much!! i was worried i was going too fast or slow because i usually do (bc i always run out of time) so it's rly reassuring to hear that you liked the pacing!! thank you for taking your time to read this <3

sehuzn December 23 2016, 19:57:19 UTC

untitledminds January 5 2017, 01:21:36 UTC

being praised by you is the highest honour honestly!!!!!! thank you so much for reading this and commenting i'm rly happy that you liked it!!! (and esp that you found it funny i tried my best aslkdsajdlksajd)

i don't like starbucks either all i taste is milk when i drink it, rly grosses me out

soybean_88 December 24 2016, 08:00:19 UTC

This was such a joy to read. Coffee shop AUs never get old or tired in the hands of a good author ^_^

Grabbing his phone out from his pocket, he texts Minseok as aggressively as his fingers will let him.

I can picture this so vividly!

“You’re not going to brew it for me this time?” asks Lu Han before he realises it’s a dumb question and hurries away from the counter without hearing Sehun’s answer.

This is just awkward enough to be COMPLETELY PLAUSIBLE I love it.

I did notice that you switched perspectives a few times - from Luhan to Sehun to all-seeing narrator and back around again, so maybe next time just choose one?

Anyway, thank you for the fic and for making my Christmas a little bit sweeter ~

untitledminds January 5 2017, 01:23:09 UTC

thank you so much for giving this a chance and im rly happy that you enjoyed it! the whole story was juts filled with awkwardness upon awkwardness i probably died multiple times from secondhand embarrassment honestly...
i hope you had a wonderful christmas!!

Haha julee22 December 26 2016, 11:28:21 UTC

My favourite part of this is Baekhyun screaming "THAT'S THE POINT" and frustratingly pacing the room

RE: Haha untitledminds January 5 2017, 01:23:30 UTC

THAT'S ONE OF MY FAVOURITE PARTS TOO! thank you for reading and commenting! xx