Hawaii 5-0 fic: Best and Heart

[jimandblair]

Rating: gen
Warning: none spring to mind
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: writing for fun and not for profit
Beta: the absolutely brilliant Springwoof

Comments:
1) British English spelling
2) Sentinel AU fusion teeny, little timestamp. A snippety snippet in the ‘Uhane universe

Comments

[springwoof]

❣❣❣

[jimandblair]

❤❤❤❤❤

[saphirablue]

♥ ♥ ♥

I love that George thinks of Steve as ♥. So awesome.

Thank you!

[jimandblair]

it sort of experimental -- but capturing George's thought processes needs that otherness. He's an emotional being ❤

And it makes me smile :-)

[simplyn2deep]

This was wonderful. I love that it's from George's PIV. It took me a bit to realize that too lol

Steve is definitely the ❤ of them

[jimandblair]

Yes, George's pov has variable elements, especially since he is a sentinel, which the reader isn't. It was fun writing this.

[rungirl60]

So, so , so awesome!!! Loved this so much!! Best POV ever, George's stream of thoughts and how he hears everything

[jimandblair]

Thank you. I did like writing George's emotion POV. He hears everything, but he listens to ❤

[rungirl60]

OMG!!! If I was technically proficient I would be putting hearts into this comment because, heart heart heart!! I love George's point of view so much!! Your writing is brilliant:)

[jimandblair]

Thank you. It was rather good fun writing this one.

adding ❤s is really straightforward. You simply copy from a webpage or copy/cut and paste from a text document. The formatting depends on the source document and the posting interface. So, for example, I copied the red heart from the story above, but you'll see how it comes out in the comment window.

❤❤❤❤❤