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holleyb76 February 1 2011, 02:30:46 UTC
Poor Tessa, imaging she'd be scraped like Elliot because she couldn't be useful :(
I love seeing Talson, the man, versus Talson the scientist struggle to do what isn't only necessary, but right. His reaction to that song was shocking! Like Tessa, we've never seen him like that. I love the imagery you gave of him locking his memories in the vault, but that's not a healthy thing to do.

Hahahaha! That's what you get Ashley! You got your ass fired! And I hope Arlo does rip out your throat out!
At least Talson knows your a fricken liar... Beatch!!!
I have a feeling she hasn't given up though. I hope she doesn't cause too much trouble.

The paparazzi? I have seen that in Val's stuff. Is that from AMB or the new one? how annoying does that get?

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xoxo_qui February 1 2011, 13:44:22 UTC
Tessa's fear of being disassembled is so strong that you cna't help but feel it when reading this!

His apology and promise to pester her until she accepted was cute, and sweet, and ...Talson is so cute! lol

Ashley, I have to admit that her over the phone firing was hilarious! I hate how she is trying to use Talson to save her own ass! It's no one's fault but her own that she climbed into bed with that good looking evil Arlo!

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valpre February 1 2011, 16:14:53 UTC
This was great Jill.

I love that Talson's not treating Tessa like she's just a machine or some hired help.

Wow, Rita certainly doesn't waste time, but where my money and future were concerned, I guess I'd act swiftly too. Ashley got what she deserves, but I'm so afraid of what she'll do now that she's in such a jam.

Looking forward to chapter eight.

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aussie_karima February 1 2011, 17:05:42 UTC
~ Sorry I did read this in the morning,but was so tired,I am only replying now!(after a sleep,& no I did not catch up on sleep,there was a big huntsman spider,roaming around!It crawled over my foot!they take ages to die,& this one was the size of my hand stretched out,& very hairy ( ... )

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starling_1 February 2 2011, 13:30:47 UTC
Tessa continues to become more and more 'human', and although Talson is kind of noticing, he doesn't seem to be taking it much further than the moment. Truly sad and ominous since she knows what will happen to her.

Ashley is a piece of work, isn't she?

Wonderful update!!

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