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valpre December 17 2010, 04:14:35 UTC
Great chapter.

I love Tessa, she's such a simbot, with human qualities! And that canopy jar, I wonder what juju it has to have put such a spell on Tessa.

I like the way you integrate the past, and explain why things are a certain way, and great concept on the Darklings. That one darkling does look fears!

Rita's a smart girl, I bet it won't be long before she's on to that gold-digging Ashley. I sense another Tamsyn there! But at least Ashley works for her money :)

And the lesson between Rita and Talson made me smile so wide. I think it's cute the way Rita has him figured out.

Loved it Jill.

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aussie_karima December 17 2010, 06:07:21 UTC
~ Wow,so much back info there,I loved the way you weave a story,always, though, I want more as it is so fasinating to read & find out,just what is going on in this world of bad air & victorian concepts!
~ Talson is a sweetie to get Tessa hair ASAP!
~ I just knew that Rita was making Talson her number one project,to get him to be more social,he will value her genuine friendship,as they are rare finds!
~ Thanks Jilly, I love it!
~ I'm staying tuned for chapter Four.........

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holleyb76 December 17 2010, 06:40:26 UTC
You got it up! It looks like you've changed it agin since my last proofing and it's already late here. it's going to have to wait until the morning.
I can't wait!!!

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jillyson December 17 2010, 11:27:47 UTC
Thanks, guys! I was hoping it wasn't too much info all at once on the reasons for the times they live in.
Don't worry, I've still got some good secrets stashed for later on.

Did you like my shameless beefcake plug for a DD calendar spot in frame 2? Lol!

Yes, Forgetful Talson remebered Tessa's request. Since she's his current invention, and his inventions are pretty much all he thinks about, that wasn't too hard for him. He wants to find out why she asked for it, and see what she'll ask for next...he's facinated with the possibilities.

And I did change it - you know me. I will edit something every single time I touch it. I will always find something that needs to be redone, replaced, removed...someone needs to pull things away from me forcably before I'll post! Holley, you're a saint to put up with such an anal, non-paying client!

I'm hard at work on chapter 4, so hopefully, it won't be too long!

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holleyb76 December 20 2010, 06:15:17 UTC
As usual such a great chapter Jill ( ... )

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