Comments | jiji_bean: Moments 14/14

jiji_bean

Moments 14/14

Jan 13, 2011 23:45

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The Doctor was lying down on his bed, the one he rarely used, since he was unable to stay still anywhere. He was always unable to stand, or sit, or lay motionless, even when he was younger. But here he was, laying down and staring at the ceiling.

He’d seen too much, he already knew that.

But now, the decision was up to him. He could ( Read more... )

fandom, moments, doctor who, nine, love, rose tyler, ten, fanfic

Comments 15

emraldeyedauter January 25 2011, 07:42:27 UTC

Lovely ending my dear and though we all know he went back for her I like to think with all this insight he now did it for lots of other reasons then when we first saw the episode of Rose that weren't so apparant till much later.

It had been a while since I read this at fanfic but so glad I had the chance to reread it here.

jiji_bean January 25 2011, 17:23:20 UTC

Thank you for re-reading it :) I had wondered what possibly could have made him go back for her (aside from the fact that she is freakin' awesome, of course) and the thought of him seeing everything that would eventually happen and still go back for her adds to the rugged, broken, passionate Doctor I fell for during that first series :)

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jiji_bean March 16 2011, 02:15:06 UTC

Awww, so glad you enjoyed it! I love this story *huggles story*

I think I'll be dreamy right alongside you.

*sigh*

alexisnihilist June 19 2011, 16:14:06 UTC

Funny thing is, although sometimes I also wish that Nine would smack Ten and that we take Ten as the younger and less responsible, truth is that Ten is actually older and more experienced then Nine... :D I blame the actors, personally. Eccleston seems like Tennant's older and wiser cousin. (without any physical relational signs...)

And the story was brilliant. At first I thought (as most fans, I think) that in "Rose" he flew away and then immediately flew back, like he forgot to say it, but I've read several stories with this plot and... it just makes you think. You've made a good job with this :)

jiji_bean June 23 2011, 02:26:58 UTC

I try not to think of the Timey Whimey - I'll either end up upset or confused or both hahaha

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far :) I'd like to think he traveled in the future saw something he liked heh.

Thank you!