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jiji_bean

Better 3/?

Jun 01, 2011 00:47

Title: Better 3/?
Pairing: Human Doctor/Rose, mentioning of Nine/Rose, Ten/Rose
Rating: Teen (this rating will increase later)
Timeline: After Journey's End
Summary: The Doctor is traveling on new territory - a human body with a very human single heart, no Tardis, and no time & space. But there's Rose - and all the emotions that resurface with her ( Read more... )

human doctor, ten, fanfic, doctor who, better, rose tyler

Comments 24

sunnytyler001 June 1 2011, 09:24:32 UTC

Beautiful! :'D

jiji_bean June 2 2011, 02:56:28 UTC

Thank you!

shellystark June 1 2011, 13:36:29 UTC

Let me say I risked being late for work to read this...and boy am I glad I did. A nice little Who pick-me-up before a long and most likely boring day!

jiji_bean June 2 2011, 02:57:32 UTC

I hope you weren't too late! I've done that myself with plenty of fics haha. So glad that it could help with your day :D

shellystark June 2 2011, 03:16:02 UTC

Nah, I made it just in time, luck me there was literally no traffic this morning!

jiji_bean June 2 2011, 03:41:27 UTC

Yay! :D

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jiji_bean June 2 2011, 02:52:21 UTC

These characters seem to have a life of their own. For the most part, he's trying to be patient...but he's still the Doctor so we all know how well he does with patience lol Rose honestly doesn't know what's going on, but her emotions and just her being is telling her it's the Doctor - but it's a lot to take in. So, it's not that each is thinking the other is waiting - it's more like...the Doctor thinks he needs to wait because of Rose and Rose just doesn't know what's going on. She needs some sleep is what I think lol.

But you're right - the pressure is building and it'll keep building until something makes it go past the brim...

I'm surprised someone likes that section of the chapter! I was hoping it wouldn't sound...crap. lol. Thank you!

rosetylersale June 2 2011, 04:36:55 UTC

I LOVE that part. I like this story because it seems so real. A lot of Rose and TenII stories start way after when they are comfortable with eachother. Those are good but i always think.....but what happend? It's like in a movie where you just keep thinking, kiss her, KISS HER! I just about want to scream that when I read this :)

I can't wait for more!!! Stop everything your doing and write dammit! Haha just kidding!

jiji_bean June 3 2011, 04:22:47 UTC

So glad you love it :) I try to follow canon as much as I can. Mostly I like to write it the way I would like to see it happen. I can't see TenII and Rose moving forward so quickly. I imagine them wanting to, but unable to actually do it. Believe me, I want these two to kiss, but they have to go through some trouble first...

lol! That is quite a compliment (because I feel that you aren't kidding lol) - more soon!

rosetylersale June 1 2011, 17:29:04 UTC

I also am now running late for work but am so glad I read this. I love it, so great!!! I Caine wait for more!!!

jiji_bean June 2 2011, 02:45:11 UTC

It seems that I've made a few of you late to work! Quite a compliment hehe I'm so glad you're loving it so far! :D

seijuro_kasumi June 1 2011, 20:35:34 UTC

I am so loving this :)

jiji_bean June 2 2011, 02:31:29 UTC

I'm so glad! Thanks for reading it :D