Fic: Delectus Meus Mihi...

[jij]

Title: Delectus Meus Mihi...
Characters: Bruce/Clark
Disclaimer: The boys belong to DC and to each other, but not to me.
Notes: Written for the 2006 Secret Santa for

Comments

[ranlynn]

Bruce requested the Watchtower teleport him directly to his place, then stood waiting for the command to go through. "Take care, Bruce," said Clark. Then something darted through his mind, maddeningly elusive...he grabbed at it. "And say hi to Alfred for me."

Eyebrows lifted like black wings. "I've never mentioned Alfred to you. He's not in the files."

Clark shook his head. It was gone again, everything but- "He makes me cookies, sometimes."

AARGH!! I was waiting for Clark to remember *Bruce* not Alfred. sigh

Bruce stood very still on the teleporter pad for a moment. Then suddenly he smiled at Clark, his face transformed into something lovely and bright and, for the first time, hauntingly familiar. As Clark caught his breath, it dissolved into blue light and was gone.

This last part gave me hope though and did curl my toes a bit.

[jij]

AARGH!! I was waiting for Clark to remember *Bruce* not Alfred. sigh

I was kind of aiming for a sad ending on this and this was the best I could manage. Though even this is kind of unsatisfying to me and I'm probably going to write a second story to get them up to speed. :)

Glad you liked the ending, though!

[magnolia_simms]

Wonderfully done, Jen! I loved it. And this line made me literally laugh out loud:

"That's why it's the Fortress of Solitude, not the Fortress of Companionship."

That's very typically Bruce... I love it!

Great job!

[jij]

Thanks! I liked that line too...and loved the image of the Fortress of Companionship. :) I think that one's probably in Orlando. Glad you liked it and thanks for the feedback!

[luxluthor]

Hi!!!
I really liked this history.....
but they should be happy!!
Question: were is Kals ring?
*wonders*
Really great
Lux
Happy New Year

[jij]

Question: were is Kals ring?

That's an excellent question, and I think I've figured out the answer!

I'll let you know soon. :)

Glad you liked it and we'll see if we can get you that happy ending. :)

[luxluthor]

squeal!!!
*bear hugh*
Lux

[jij]

Thank you!

*gets hugged*

[sailorptah]

That was really cool.

Loved the description of x-ray eyes, and the ending: not totally back to normal, but on the right track.

[jij]

Thank you! I like to end stories with things at least on the right track. :) Glad you liked it!

[jij]

Aw...*blushes* Thank you! I really enjoyed writing it as well, but then I'm a sucker for stories where one character has a lot more knowledge than the other.