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jij

Roclk Hard Elrectionls

Sep 13, 2006 12:25

Pairing: Clark/Bruce
Disclaimer: The boys belong to DC and to each other, but not to me.
Notes: For the worlds_finest challenge, "Spam." This is an "outtake" from the movieverse series...this never happened within the series, though the boys both wish it had. Oh, and this is entirely unbetaed, all mistakes and embarrassments are mine and mine alone.
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Comments 61

pikapika217 September 13 2006, 16:48:31 UTC

d'aww! very cute! and funny too. Bravo!

jij September 13 2006, 18:03:51 UTC

Thanks for reading it! Sweet icon, by the way. (Sailor Moon fan from way back)

pikapika217 September 13 2006, 18:04:57 UTC

'dankies! Sailor Venus has always been my favorite, mostly because she so nice and sweet, and practically perfect.

tmelange September 13 2006, 16:54:18 UTC

They are so adorable, Jen! Is this continuity or an outtake of your series? Are they really going to get this far without knowing secret identities? Squee! That's marvelous! They are a couple! Clark and Bruce! And without knowing about the superhero thing!

This was hot too, and funny. Kudos.

jij September 13 2006, 18:08:53 UTC

Is this continuity or an outtake of your series?

Oh, outtake all the way. They're definitely not to this point yet. :)

Are they really going to get this far without knowing secret identities?

Um....if readers will suspend disbelief enough to allow Bruce and Clark to somehow manage to partition that part of their life off mentally and fail to make the crucial connections, there's an excellent chance this scene will replay with the situation very different but the essential dynamic much the same. *embarrassed cough* I realized after posting that despite being a throw-away outtake this story actually gives away a lot of where the series is going, LOL.

tmelange September 13 2006, 18:25:09 UTC

I'm confused. Is this story going to be a valid future story or is it an alternate take? I'm basically wondering if this is actually going to be the status of their relationship at some point in the future -- the two of them sexually involved and domesticated, like a couple, but without knowing identities? Just curious...

And, I ddon't think it's such a stretch. It's not as if Batman and Superman would be running into each other every day. If Batman is sufficiently masked to the senses -- it's not so hard to swallow. Especially in the case of Batman, where the only thing that can be seen is his lips and chin. The only thing that might be hard to mask is smell.

jij September 13 2006, 19:05:46 UTC

I'm confused. Is this story going to be a valid future story or is it an alternate take?

It's definitely an alternate take. The first time is not going to happen this way. But they are going to manage to get each other into bed at least for a little while without finding out the other identity. :)

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jij September 13 2006, 18:11:12 UTC

Such delicious smut is not taming smut bunnies over here.

That's...excellent news! *cheers on the wild smut bunnies*

schala_kid September 13 2006, 18:04:17 UTC

Bruce's blue eyes sparked up at him, his face flushed. "Don't be ridiculous, Clark, you'd look damn silly. All you need to do is take--" a thrust of the hips against his that made Clark gasp, "--what you want." Another thrust.

Oh I love Movie!Bruce he's such a flirt so irresistible no wonder Clark just went and took him.

"If you can't realize that Superman was just a substitute for you, then you're as stupid as I thought you were when I met you." Another kiss on top of the bite. "Who needs a Superman when I have you?"

Woah someone who loves Clark and not Supes this must be a first for him, gah! Clark be happy and don't listen to your Kryptonian mother!

I really loved the sex scene and with Clark's S/B fic paralleling them it was just hot and good! Oh and I have a question did Clark kept his glasses on? *giggles* if so how cute! No wonder Bruce fell for him.

jij September 13 2006, 18:14:34 UTC

Oh and I have a question did Clark kept his glasses on?

I have to assume he did, thus adding the humor of his big klonky glasses probably smacking Bruce in the face. :)

schala_kid September 13 2006, 18:22:00 UTC

I am sure Bruce loved it!

godiloveslash September 13 2006, 18:20:55 UTC

Two fics in one day, I must have been a good girl today. This was lovely jen with just the right amount of sweetness and smut.

I also have to say that I adore your icon to death!

jij September 14 2006, 00:09:34 UTC

I also have to say that I adore your icon to death!

*hugs her icon very much*

I've been meaning to work on my smut lately...I need practice. Yeah, that's it. :)