Comments | jij: Music of the Spheres 3: Infiltrations

jij

Music of the Spheres 3: Infiltrations

Sep 11, 2006 21:21

Pairing: Clark/Bruce
Disclaimer: The boys belong to DC and to each other, but not to me.
Notes: "Music of the Spheres" is a series set in the combined universes of "Batman Begins" and "Superman Returns." Other stories and notes on the series here.
Oh, and this is dedicated to tmelange, for like Galactus, she hungers...for fic.
Rating: G (G! Again! I ( Read more... )

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Comments 67

jade_dragoness September 12 2006, 06:54:06 UTC

I started laughing from the very first line, managed to calm down a bit during the part where Superman want to defend Bruce and just about broke something bursting into giggles at the end.

"An international porn star?"

"Exactly. I mean--hey! Well, yes."

*giggles* So that's where Clark was all this time! AWESOME!!!

The randomness of them finding a bomb was utterly perfect!

Clark put the basket down gingerly on the desk. Bruce grabbed Clark's wrist; Clark grabbed Bruce's, and they dragged each other out of the room.

Yay! They're holding hands already! Or wrists...*dances*

The first date was certainly a blast. *has no shame*

Awww...Bruce being worried for Clark makes my heart squish then melt into my shoes. *happy sigh* How much do I adore a Bruce that is willing to care for people instead of just holding them away? I adore it sooooooo much.

And Batman calling Superman 'Kal'! Whee! *waves tiny flag of victory*

[9:09] Drunkenwastrel: So...want to get together tomorrow and compare notes ( ... )

jij September 12 2006, 15:33:11 UTC

*giggles* So that's where Clark was all this time! AWESOME!!!

Think of the advantages superpowers would give someone in the industry! The stamina alone would be useful.

Yay! They're holding hands already! Or wrists...*dances*

I'll stop at nothing, including leveling buildings, to get them to touch each other.

Awww...Bruce being worried for Clark makes my heart squish then melt into my shoes.

He felt terribly responsible...I had to hold him back from being more openly worried. Poor Bruce.

I wonder how the second date will ever top the first?

The second not-a-date, you mean. :) Prepare for more...hand/wrist-holding! The excitement never ends. *grin*

vejiicakes September 12 2006, 07:14:25 UTC

HOORAY!!! デートナムバーツーGO!! XD JUMP HIM, BRUCE! First base! GO FOR FIRST BASE!

I love it. I love it all. They're were so plainly worried about each other while getting their Hero on, all, "Ihavetogodosomething, YOU GET SOMEWHERE SAFE!!"

Eeeee oh goodness, this chapter is making me all giggly and babbly. Bruce is so much more fun and easy to like, and Clark, while still his charmingly endearing self, feels so much more shuttered and waaaarg I want to hug him T_T I want Bruce to do so slightly more, though.. and to do slightly more, if it come to that ^_^;; *wiggles happily* This was wonderful!

jij September 12 2006, 15:45:14 UTC

"Ihavetogodosomething, YOU GET SOMEWHERE SAFE!!"

I have to admit I did love this moment, although it was hard to write it correctly. I could see it so clearly, like a movie, but it was hard to get that across. Seems to have worked though. :)

Bruce is so much more fun and easy to like, and Clark, while still his charmingly endearing self, feels so much more shuttered and waaaarg I want to hug him

Clark desperately needs some industrial-strength hugging in this series. I think this Bruce is up to the task once he finally gets to it. :)

Spix should be reading her books but... anonymous September 12 2006, 17:43:12 UTC

That was funny^^I love when ours boys are in "denial mode on"!! Please, tell me Alfred is going to find the e-mails soon or maybe he is going to hear them speaking by phone or something!! Alfred will die for the fun only^^
... God I have to study!! But how can I study Greek History and The Sacred Battalion of Tebas without thinking about S/B relationshinp?!...
Well, I suppose I´m going to be giggling all day^^

Re: Spix should be reading her books but... jij September 12 2006, 20:19:41 UTC

Greek History definitely does not trump S/B.

We're going to switch to Metropolis soon and it'll be hard to work Alfred in some more! *sob* But Lex will show back up...he's taking a 4-chapter break right now, unfortunately.

Re: Spix should be reading her books but... anonymous September 13 2006, 02:25:13 UTC

I can wait for Alfred and his elegant jokes^^

marag September 12 2006, 17:50:41 UTC

::snickers madly:: It just keeps getting better! I love how they're both trying to protect the other :) Hee.

jij September 12 2006, 20:20:43 UTC

I do really enjoy the irony of each of them watching out for the poor helpless other guy. :)

cero_ate September 12 2006, 18:08:28 UTC

So funny. Loved it all but especially
And you're no more a drunken wastrel than I'm a...a..." Clark seemed at a loss for the right phrase.

"An international porn star?"

"Exactly. I mean--hey! Well, yes."

It'd be an interesting porno;)

and this was absolutely priceless

"You know..." Kal hesitated. "We keep running into each other, but...I have no way of contacting you if I were to really need to get in touch with you. I can't exactly float in the skies of Gotham and yell 'Where's Batman!' until you show up."

He ought too. Might get him his communicator faster. Loved this.

jij September 12 2006, 20:22:08 UTC

He ought too. Might get him his communicator faster.

I bet if he did that he'd have a communicator in his hands within an hour. :)

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed!