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FIC: Not Another Moment (With Rai_Daydreamer)

Sep 15, 2008 21:33

Title: Not Another Moment
Challenge prompt: 10. "Love is for the fools who fall behind" --
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fic, co-write

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jij September 16 2008, 04:41:22 UTC

Bruce covers every angle with his Kryptonian! *grin* Glad you liked it!

starsandsea September 15 2008, 18:06:08 UTC

The last week had been one emergency after another--interstellar invasions, natural disasters, a power-grab by Luthor, a couple of temporal anomalies that needed attention--there had been little time for much more than fighting and an occasional hour of sleep.

*pets Clark* Poor baby...

Almost nothing in their interactions that would indicate Clark had at last found out what Bruce's eyes looked like lit with ecstasy, what his voice sounded like calling out Clark's name in rapture. Bruce had been bright and dark together, mystery and clarity, passion and restraint--

... Guuuuhhh...

There may be no other sign of human life on the island, but it would hardly do to sweep the man up in an embrace. However much he might want to.

Hee. *pets Clark again*

"The emergency is that the JLA has noticed that one of its members is dangerously overstressed and overworked and has requested that I be sure he gets a little bit of rest and relaxation."

*giggles*

The other glove came off quite slowly, revealing Bruce's skin bit by bit;*drools ( ... )

jij September 16 2008, 04:54:36 UTC

Clark and Bruce were very frustrated here! It was a pleasure to give them some alone time... :)

Mmm, I really liked Clark's memory of Bruce during sex. What it would take to get Batman lost in passion...is fun to imagine. :)

Bruce as a spirit was a fun image! I really wanted to work in some of Clark as a spirit of the air, like Ariel in the Temptest, but it wouldn't get in without becoming kind of pedantic, lol. If I'd been in Bruce's head...but then I would have lost the wood-spirit image and I loved that too much to give up.

Isn't the art gorgeous!? I spent a lot of time just staring at it, although I couldn't make it my wallpaper while I was in Maine, lol...

bradygirl_12 September 16 2008, 17:05:23 UTC

Isn't the art gorgeous!? I spent a lot of time just staring at it, although I couldn't make it my wallpaper while I was in Maine, lol...

Yep, it's my wallpaper here at home, too! ;)

eve_k September 15 2008, 18:11:25 UTC

Beautiful imagery as always, Jen. I especially liked this:
"I couldn't wait any longer," Bruce panted, writhing against him, head flung back, hair trailing in the water like a dark cloud.

jij September 16 2008, 04:55:45 UTC

I could have spent a lot of ink (virtual ink) on how good Bruce looked in the water! It was kind of hard to stop, lol...

Glad you enjoyed and thanks so much for commenting!

bradygirl_12 September 15 2008, 18:17:20 UTC

Mmm, an Adam in Eden. :)

Bruce certainly fills that role nicely! So does that make Clark Eve, or the apple? ;)

Wonderful story, Jen! I firmly believe in rest and relaxation. I deplore the American penchant to disregard vacations. Can you say burn-out?

I love Clark floating! As I told Rai, I once saw a picture of SV Clark floating while on a picnic with Lex, and it's an illo I always remember! :) I love Clark using his powers in ways like this. :)

Rai's artwork is outstanding!

jij September 16 2008, 04:59:50 UTC

Bruce certainly fills that role nicely! So does that make Clark Eve, or the apple? ;)

A little of both, I suspect! :D

I think Bruce especially would be quite strict about avoiding burnout. He would probably sometimes be a bit joyless about it--but with Clark, he probably would really enjoy himself.

I do enjoy Clark using his powers casually and relaxedly. It always says something about his trust toward who he's with.

Glad you liked!

brushed_velvet September 15 2008, 18:35:17 UTC

Hmm, so the rest of us have to make do with stress relief toys and Clark gets flirty, slowly stripping naked Bruce... unfair! Ah, but Clark deserves it lol!

Btw, I was having a mooch through your Bruce/Clark non-series story list earlier and now they've disappeared. *woe*

jij September 16 2008, 05:55:36 UTC

Hmm, so the rest of us have to make do with stress relief toys and Clark gets flirty, slowly stripping naked Bruce... unfair!

It is terribly unfair, is it not? Luckily, Clark enjoys it enough for all of us. :)

Btw, I was having a mooch through your Bruce/Clark non-series story list earlier and now they've disappeared. *woe*

*HORRIFIED LOOK* Auuuuugh. Thank you for pointing that out to me, I might not have noticed it for a while. Now begins the hard, hard work of reconstructing the fic list...*shudders unhappily*