Comments | jij: Fic: With My Body, I Thee Worship

jij

Fic: With My Body, I Thee Worship

Aug 18, 2008 21:47

Title: With My Body, I Thee Worship
Challenge prompt: 9. "I laughed so hard, I nearly cried"... --
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jij August 19 2008, 04:26:44 UTC

Yay! It started off as a straightforward sort of PWP--Kal balking but learning to like it...but it just seemed to require more time for him to get to that point, so...more time with Bruce being trustworthy and not pressuring, which ended up being some of my favorite parts to write (isn't that always the way?) I'm glad you liked the end result!

northernwalker August 18 2008, 20:03:27 UTC

Guh.

Brain melted.

So good.

Will comment when brain comes back online.

jij August 19 2008, 06:27:29 UTC

*grins and blushes* Thank you! Glad to make you, uh, brain-melty. :)

northernwalker September 30 2008, 19:06:16 UTC

Brain finally back online.

I want that shower. Equipped with a Bruce and Kal, please.

He had learned a lot of English before his marriage, but his lessons hadn't covered any of the words Bruce was saying.

I adore this bit. Language classes rarely cover the naughty words. And Bruce in a frilly apron! *snickering crazily*

Let others speak of perversion and depravity; he knew the truth. This was merely another one of the many secrets he would share with his love: in bed, in costume, in all their life together.

In the immortal words of me: Awww!

jij October 1 2008, 04:23:57 UTC

I crave that shower SO MUCH. Especially if it comes with hot boys. ;)

And Bruce in the frilly apron filled me with glee to write. Might be my favorite thing in this story, oddly enough. :)

So glad you liked! *dances*

ladyivy August 18 2008, 21:56:33 UTC

Wow. I mean, just, wow.

I don't think I've read any of the other stories in this series yet; I will have to remedy that when I have some time to sit and read them in order and appreciate them properly but for this installment just...wow... is really all I can come up with right now.

Words fail me to truly express how much I loved the way you described the deepening relationship through the various days.

Thank you.

jij August 19 2008, 06:28:58 UTC

Thank you so much! This was really meant to be a porny PWP, but the story kind of demanded I spend more time on deepening the trust, and I was happy to do so. *grin* I'm actually looking forward to writing more in this series sometime...

theclexfactor August 18 2008, 23:40:08 UTC

That was one of the most beautiful and sexy love scenes I have ever read. I love this universe you've created and each story is funny in the right places and just sexy as hell in the rest. I also love learning about this universe's Kryptonian culture. They're almost like Southern Baptist, lol. (I live in the South, so I can say so, lol)

jij August 19 2008, 06:33:06 UTC

I'm really enjoying the tone of the series as well, trying to mix humor and cultural misunderstanding with sex.

I also love learning about this universe's Kryptonian culture. They're almost like Southern Baptist, lol. (I live in the South, so I can say so, lol)

I had a friend who grew up in a very conservative church note once that his church didn't approve of sex...because it might lead to dancing, lol. The Kryptonians seem very similar to that! Sex is fine as long as you don't risk that dirty, dirty cuddling... :P

oceanmare August 19 2008, 02:05:50 UTC

Gorgeous imagery. I love the way the cultural differences, the technology, all the subtle little things reinforce the alieness between them.

jij August 19 2008, 07:16:38 UTC

Eee, thanks! I'm having a lot of fun exploring how Kal would be if raised on Krypton as a normal Kryptonian and ending up with a not-really normal human. :)