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Fic: Sweet as Wine (with Rai_Daydreamer)

Feb 29, 2008 21:44

Title: Sweet as Wine
Challenge prompt: 6. night, and the loves of... --
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silvercat17 February 29 2008, 22:32:57 UTC
I have no words but: SQUEE. You know, I only read BxS because of you.

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jij March 1 2008, 13:19:59 UTC
Glad you liked it and thank you for the compliment! *blushes*

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carolandtom February 29 2008, 22:57:19 UTC
Great fic! Kal is adorable when he's drunk and I find him very hot too. Of course Bruce agrees with me. I hope we haven't seen the last of that wine.

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jij March 1 2008, 13:21:40 UTC
I'm sure Kal at least hasn't seen the last of that wine. :) I was tickled at how cute he was drunk! Thank goodness he wasn't surly or morose, lol.

*grin* Glad you liked it!

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batfan_sarah February 29 2008, 23:03:16 UTC
heeheehee, so cute and hot.

...i wanna get some of that alcohol. the way you described it sounds just oh so delicious :)

and tying up bruce is always....a very nice image. mwahahaha.

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jij March 1 2008, 13:23:40 UTC
...i wanna get some of that alcohol. the way you described it sounds just oh so delicious :)

I had fun making a sort of Ideal Alcohol, lol. Just makes you happy and fuzzy and horny, and no hangover...oh, those lucky Kryptonians...

and tying up bruce is always....a very nice image. mwahahaha.

The picture totally melted my brain, and when she told me the story she imagined behind it I kind of begged her to let me write it. I have no shame...

*hugs* Glad you liked it!

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saavikam77 March 1 2008, 03:52:19 UTC
Hee hee!!! ^_^ *giggles* Man, Clark is a fantastic drunk. And he didn't even get a hangover! O_O Lucky man. :p

And yet, he's lucky *and* screwed, that Bruce can make more of that alcohol. ^_~

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jij March 1 2008, 13:43:05 UTC
Hey, speaking of influence! Your story definitely encouraged me to write this...although I decided to avoid the h/c of the hangover, lol. Yeah, Kryptonians are lucky bastards and don't get hangovers from their favorite drink! Bruce is going to have to be careful or Kal will be breaking into his stores... :)

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crimsonquills March 1 2008, 05:45:52 UTC
You seem to have a talent for keeping just this side of the embarrassment squick, because normally drunk stories also go a bit too far for me, but not this one! :-) I think it's that Bruce isn't embarrassed or mocking, he just has fun with it. And it helps that zhynan has the opposite effect of Terran alcohol when it comes to physical arousal. *grins*

This was wonderfully sweet. I loved that once Kal got Bruce tied up, he was the one whose control totally fell apart! And the ending was, of course, perfect. Bruce probably had that wine analyzed down to the last molecule before he even considered offering it to Kal. Just in case. :-)

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jij March 1 2008, 13:50:23 UTC
You seem to have a talent for keeping just this side of the embarrassment squick...It helps that I have some of the same squick myself--though not as much as my husband, who simply can't watch sitcoms and romantic comedies. He gets increasingly fidgety and eventually yells something like, "I can't stand it! Just tell him the truth or it's all going to backlash on you and you'll be mortified!" at the screen and bolts from the room ( ... )

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crimsonquills March 2 2008, 21:12:02 UTC
It helps that I have some of the same squick myself--though not as much as my husband, who simply can't watch sitcoms and romantic comedies. He gets increasingly fidgety and eventually yells something like, "I can't stand it! Just tell him the truth or it's all going to backlash on you and you'll be mortified!" at the screen and bolts from the room. :)

*grins* I've been known to do the same thing on occasion. Although mostly I try to get through it by plugging my ears and humming loudly for awhile!

Despite having the squick, I do have a lot of fun writing Clark being embarrassed, but yeah...I tend to make it bearable (at least to myself) by having Bruce or any other witnesses be affectionate about it.

I can understand. Steve is the same in a lot of ways, I think. I read a story that described him as being like a high school football player when he's embarrassed, and it's so true! He's incredibly cute when he blushes.

Although with Lois as a partner, I bet Clark embarrasses less easily than he might otherwise. *g*

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jij March 3 2008, 04:45:27 UTC
I can understand. Steve is the same in a lot of ways, I think. I read a story that described him as being like a high school football player when he's embarrassed, and it's so true! He's incredibly cute when he blushes.

I think I can handle it better when it's my pairing because I can be in the embarrassed person's head and know it's not TOO bad, or in the other person's and know they're not laughing at them harshly.

I wonder if it's a fandom thing? Because the popularity of sitcoms and comedies that play on embarrassment and/or humiliation seems to indicate that most folks don't have that squick. But I find a lot of folks in fandom do. Maybe we sympathise with the characters more?I wonder if it's something a lot of people have but don't feel safe admitting? Because it's just as bad with a random sitcom as with characters he knows for my husband, but when we're with friends he'll grit his teeth, because it seems like such an odd thing to be squicked by. It wasn't until really recently I began to realize it wasn't a very isolated ( ... )

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