Ficlet: Losing Control

[jij]

Title: Losing Control
Characters/Pairings: Superman/Batman
Rating: NC-17
Summary:  Clark learns mind-control can be a lot of fun, when done properly.
Word count:  930
Note:  A PWP continuation from 5 Times Superman was Mind-Controlled and Didn't Try to Kill Batman.

Superman was lying on his narrow cot in his sparse Watchtower quarters.  His

Comments

[bradygirl_12]

Mmm, sexy stuff, Jen! :)

Very good descriptions of Clark being loved by Bruce in this unusual way.

I liked the way you used both 'chord' and 'cord' in the same sentence. One of my pet gripes is not typos, as we all do those, but continued misspellings of words, like 'loose' when they mean 'lose' and vice versa, or 'desert' when someone's eating what comes after a meal instead of being out on the desert! ;) So I was happy to see both spellings of these words and used correctly!

Poor Clark trying to convince himself that this was all he needed from Bruce, figuring that Bruce just couldn't hand over control like that, but of course he got a very nice surprise! :)

[jij]

I liked the way you used both 'chord' and 'cord' in the same sentence. One of my pet gripes is not typos, as we all do those, but continued misspellings of words, like 'loose' when they mean 'lose' and vice versa, or 'desert' when someone's eating what comes after a meal instead of being out on the desert! ;) So I was happy to see both spellings of these words and used correctly!

*snickers* I'm sure you'll believe me when I say I checked those two words about 12 times, unsure they were exactly right and knowing I'd kick myself if they were pointed out as wrong later. :)

I'm still a little surprised Bruce was willing to hand it over myself! I'm sure he has failsafes in place, though--right? (I suppose they could fail!)

[starsandsea]

When he opened them, he saw the simple gold circlet on the table.

Next to it a note in a familiar precise hand:

Your turn.

*giggles* They're going to have a lot of fun with this, aren't they? ;)

Lovely, as always, Jen. :)

[jij]

They are having a terrifying amount of fun with this! :) Which is good for me! We'll see if I can pull off a last chapter sometime...

[jij]

You *had* to know that my mind went straight to the gutter with a closer like that. For some reason a mental image of Bruce being in the middle of a conversation and just stopping as Clark took control of his body popped into his head.

Oh man, that would be so great. *snickers* I am not sure to what evil use Clark will put it, but I know it'll be fun.

And what's even better is that Clark realizes that he does trust Bruce by giving him control, or at least not fighting Bruce's control over him and freaking out. lol

It was a close one, but it seemed in-character for him to panic a bit before enjoying himself. :) Glad you liked!

[darkdanc3r]

ooh... oh my! And here i'm flushed when a trainee stops by and says he's not interested in the job anymore! whups!

I want to read one from Bruce's perspective, please?

[jij]

*beams* I'm having a hell of a time writing Bruce's POV in sex lately, so it might be a challenge, but it's a challenge I might like to try and meet, at least a little! *wanders off, pondering*

[batfan_sarah]

GUH.

oh, jen, that was awesome and hot, and you have to HAVE to write clark's turn!

oh em gee :D

[jij]

*grin* I've been debating how to write the next section--I think Bruce's POV has to come into play, but on the other hand I'd really like to see what Clark is thinking while having the chance to control Bruce, lol...

Glad you liked it!