Shrunked #2

[jiia_chan]

Title: The Healing Power of Mockery (Shrunked 2)
Author: Jiia
Rating: PG13
Summary: Peter and Sylar try to figure things out, Mohinder makes a call, and Mohinder the Lizard wonders about his master’s sanity.
Pairing: Mylar, Petlar, Pinder
Warnings: Talk of death. Talk of man love. Talk of Mohinder in bunny ears. The usual.
A/N: This took on a life

Comments

[yo_mawari]

Awwww....

It's adorable! I can't wait for the next part!

Alas, the few times I've tried to beta a fic I have failed miserably or I would offer my serivces. I tend to get a little too caught up in the story and miss some obvious mistakes. ^_^

[jiia_chan]

I'm so glad you like it! I love your fanfictions to death, by the way, so when I saw your name I was all *SQUEEEE!!!!!!!!*
Thanks for commenting!

[flying_monkees]

This was so adorable! I really like this story and hope you keep this up as a series, I really want to see where it goes. And mini-Peter and mini-Sylar are so cute together! I hope they can learn to get along. And I like how Mohinder's enjoying watching them.

I don't do grammer or punctuation very well, but if you just need someone to look the story over for misspelings and flow, I'll volunteer.

[jiia_chan]

Mohinder's a total voyeur, and knows it, too. I'm currently trying to work out how to let him get in on the action without having to get rid of the Mini-ness. There are many, many ways it could happen, but one that seem, well... appropriate.
In any case... Mostly what I want from a beta is someone to read it over, show me where I skipped a period, tell me when I forgot to capitalize something, when I'm being a moron and put a word twice or said something incomprehensible.... Stuff like that. If you feel like you're up for the challenge, that's wonderful! My email is snowblossom@shaw.ca, so just go ahead and email me.
Oh, and by the way, you'll probably be busier than stink for about a week, and then have nothing to do for three months. Alas, such is the flighty temperament of my muse.
Thanks for commenting!

[flying_monkees]

Mo does seem the voyeur type. lol And if they're going to be shrunk for much longer, they'll need a place to live...*daydreams of Barbie's Dream House*

Anyways, I'd be happy to give beta'ing a shot for you. I'll send you an email so you can get hold of me. And I don't mind being busy for short spurts, I understand how muse's work. lol

[flwrpwr_vampyre]

Awww The adorableness of this is to much to bear!!
His elegant fingers (His hands really were lovely, no matter what size they were.) My favoritest line EVER. I love his hands.

[jiia_chan]

Have you noticed that all the characters on Heroes all have really nice/interesting hands? You can tell which character you're looking at just from the hands. It's really quite interesting.
Anyways, thanks for commenting!

[flwrpwr_vampyre]

I hadn't noticed. Usually I'm too preoccupied with lips and eyebrows to even notice that they have hands. LOL

[lord_vilid]

Oooo! Is this going to be an onrunning thingy? B/C that would be awesome if it was!

Oh, you might want to fix the LJ-cut you posted on the Comm, it doesn't work. It loads as:

http://http//yourLJhere.com/#.html

So it doesn't work, it took me forever to figure out how to get to this.

Anyway, the interaction between Sylar and Peter is adorable. MOAR!! Please...?

[jiia_chan]

I think I've fixed the link now... At least I hope so. I'm sorry you had to go through so much trouble! I'm sort of new to this, so I really have no idea what I'm doing. Thanks for being tolerant.
And yes, it looks like it's going to be an ongoing thing. At least three, maybe more. Depending on how long it takes for the 'You're two inches tall!' thing to stop being funny. Which might very well never happen. So you never know. Anyways...
Thanks for commenting!

[jiia_chan]

That's actually a reference to another fanfiction I was writing at the time, which I might very well post here once it's finished. And yes, when that line popped into my head, I burst several blood vessels trying not to crack up and wake my various roommates.
Thanks for commenting!