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Jun 09, 2009 22:46

12 minibots…

He didn’t know exactly when it had started.  It was a compulsion now though - as deeply rooted and as seemingly uncontrollable as a core piece of programming.

5 Dinobots…

He knew it had to save lives, had to keep them from leaving bots behind on the battlefield.  When he stopped to consider the habit, which wasn’t very often, he ( Read more... )

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ante_luce June 11 2009, 07:46:09 UTC
Wow, I really like this. The last few lines particularly... I might have used an 'and' in place of 'as' there, but it's just a personal preference ^_^;;

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jigsaws231 June 11 2009, 12:58:44 UTC
Thank you. :) An 'and' instead of 'as' in "as he had to watch"? Hmm - thanks for the suggestion.

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ante_luce June 11 2009, 14:19:59 UTC
No problem. But either works fine, really.

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