Oh I loved your additions, that was just perfect to tie the bag together :DD
The adventure/thriller/last man standing part was still scary and poor guys, you totally did their constant stress justice.
And them sleeping together in the yard <3333 Oh bb I just smiled so wide at them unpacking the bag. I loved that scene. And extra gold star of awesomeness for the Narnia vs Labyrint comment \\\0///
And then them going back just to settle the ghosts, yeah - definitely good choice of an ending. Loved it!
I always enjoy your stories, this one took me to a place that I didn't expect from you but I enjoyed it anyway. I love not being able to put people in a box. Thanks so much!
This is definitely one of your best. I loved the clean, simple prose because it did not take away from the suspense and the emotional torture of the first part, and the uncertainty and revelation of the second. I actually felt like I was in Kris's brain, like I was hearing his voice tell me the story of what happened. And that part when he realized that he just loved Adam, plain and simple, was just fantastic.
Damn, you're good LOL. (Well yeah, like that's brand new information :P) ILU bb doll <333
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The adventure/thriller/last man standing part was still scary and poor guys, you totally did their constant stress justice.
And them sleeping together in the yard <3333 Oh bb I just smiled so wide at them unpacking the bag. I loved that scene. And extra gold star of awesomeness for the Narnia vs Labyrint comment \\\0///
And then them going back just to settle the ghosts, yeah - definitely good choice of an ending. Loved it!
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This is definitely one of your best. I loved the clean, simple prose because it did not take away from the suspense and the emotional torture of the first part, and the uncertainty and revelation of the second. I actually felt like I was in Kris's brain, like I was hearing his voice tell me the story of what happened. And that part when he realized that he just loved Adam, plain and simple, was just fantastic.
Damn, you're good LOL. (Well yeah, like that's brand new information :P) ILU bb doll <333
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