[shige/pi] the beginnings of a gas station romance and more 2/2
title : the beginnings of a gas station romance and more 2/2
pairing : shige/pi (with a healthy dose of gen-NEWS)
author : binmusicrating : NC-17 ( Read more... )
pairing : shige/pi (with a healthy dose of gen-NEWS)
author : binmusicrating : NC-17 ( Read more... )
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I Love it!
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Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking the time to comment :]
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Like I said, the fact that you wrote a whopping 12k is amazement in itself and I am so in love with you, as in love as Pi is with Shige who is great at sexing him up ♥♥ You even had them have sex in a bathtub (and no, do not attempt to deny it) and ahsdkcjashcj;h did I say I love bathtub sex or did I say I love bathtub sex? :DDD
But um, I'm getting a little too ahead here...
I love the humour in this boo. And I don't care if you insist that it's acquired taste. You have the witticisms and the snark and I love the entire first paragraph alone. And all the paragraphs after that. The way you created this crazy little world of five strange guys working in a gas station and living together in a little block, and the way they welcome Pi into their world XDD You have this marvellous way of constructing whole AUs and making me want more of them. You really do boo. And don't get all noisy on me about how you're not because I'll just block you out like how Tegoshi has to ( ... )
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"No," Pi says with a sadface that Massu feels is only appropriate for funerals or when really good food (like that mango mousse cake he just had) falls to the floor and the five second rule isn't applicable. "Those things really ride up your ass."
Massu grimaces, all thoughts of mango mousse and food out of his mind.
IT MADE MASSU FORGET ABOUT FOOD HOW CRUEL. And when Massu is trying to give Pi helpful advice too. I love Massu, did I mention that before? ♥
"People just do it. I'm sure there's a hole somewhere he'll fit into."
No shit, more than one hole, Toma, more than one! :D
Tegoshi ignores them for the most part, chiming in to add, "PG only," when he's around the both of them.
You don't like him but I do and that was his best line. Aside from "I need money for earplugs". And by the way, boo, I think Tegoshi doesn't really want earplugs, he's just pretending. Because ( ... )
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And, you let Shige top
I realllllly don't know what to say. Like I think you've turned my brain into mush. I love how everyone is concerned for Shige's sake (even Ryo, the big brother who doesn't feel that way for Shige. If Pi and his moobs (that Koyama adores) weren't so appealing, I'd love a RyoShige version of this lol
Btw, I think you meant "anyhow" instead of "anyone" in this sentence: "Cos you look like one. Anyone, I've got a dress rehearsal to get to, I'll call you later. Don't drop dead on me just yet. We've still got a ways to go."
So yeah. Uh...I don't know what to say except omg I love gas station!NEWS and your AUs rock my world and Lib I need to talk to you more often lol &hearts &hearts &hearts
MADE OF WIN :D
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the others reactions "the day after" are so funny xD
It made me really laugh :P
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Thanks for commenting :D
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It started being cracky, then funny (which is almost the same I know ^^), then sweet, then bittersweet, then sad, then corny and then hot and.. duh. I'm bowing down for your writing abilities.
And the best must be probably be that you let Shige top. haha :D
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Haha, yeah I wrote this fic in bits actually so some of the more cracky parts were written first whereas the more serious, but still lighthearted ones were written later. lsfglk;skjfkshuajdhgsgl; no need to bow down to me for anything! I'm a regular gal D: Save the bowing for Gem :]
LOL Yes well, Pi's sort of metaphorically speaking, a virgin so it makes more sense for the one who knows where to put things, to top xD
Thanks for commenting!
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