Comments | jewelledhours: [eunhyuk/donghae] starts and stops

catskilt in jewelledhours

[eunhyuk/donghae] starts and stops

Jun 27, 2010 17:30

starts and stops by catskilt
eunhyuk/donghae
nc-17; 5736 words; angst
they're hurting themselves over and over, but they can't get out of it.
half-inspired by the story of his 'love triangle' that eunhyuk told on happy together.

( what happens: hyukjae says the wrong name. )

g: super junior, #one-shot, p: eunhyuk/donghae, a: catskilt

Comments 78

tees2mai June 27 2010, 14:20:52 UTC

spot

tees2mai June 27 2010, 14:54:29 UTC

;;

omg. /goes to quote

catskilt June 28 2010, 14:35:56 UTC

;___;

eiarim June 27 2010, 15:06:18 UTC

SPOT:D

eiarim June 27 2010, 16:18:55 UTC

OMG all I could think was how real this sounded like (not that I'm praying they to be gay or sth, but they might be sth y'know)
I can't stop crying over this and because of hae is my huge bias I feels like slapping hyuk for doing this to hae. But I can't, seems they both had accidentally involve in this tangle mess.
Your writing is just so beautiful and I'll never hesistant to give it a second go, or probably more.

Meme this ♥

catskilt June 28 2010, 14:39:19 UTC

Thank you :) Hyuk does come off pretty badly in this, poor baby.

featherie June 27 2010, 15:54:33 UTC

... I understand what you mean when you say you might possibly have written this only for the hyukhae sexy times. But this was beautiful, an intricate web of before and after, past and present and future and it's almost magical in a sense, but so angsty that it completely pulls the whole story back down to earth and grounds it. Your writing, it flows with such ease that my eyes just kept reading and reading and reading, I was so enthralled. This is amazing and gorgeous and all the adjectives in the thesaurus that compliments this story, because the emotion of both boys and the meaning behind everything is just... spectacular, idek.

It's been a long time since I've been this absorbed in a fic. ;)

catskilt June 28 2010, 14:45:50 UTC

To be honest, all I wanted to write was pwp :| but apparently it is impossible for me to write pwp without throwing in some smidgen of a plot, and that plot goes and develops itself, and I wind up with a 5000-word fic. Ah well :| I'm so glad you liked it bb ♥ and thank you so much for leaving such a lovely comment *___*

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catskilt June 28 2010, 14:41:51 UTC

Thank you bb ♥

leona_green June 27 2010, 16:08:00 UTC

Omg..so sad...you make me cried till the end T_T
I was kinda hoping for somewhat a happy ending but it just so sad T_T

catskilt June 28 2010, 14:50:08 UTC

It's...happy...in the sense that they're still together? D: Thank you for reading~