[eunhyuk/donghae] tides we swam against

Apr 24, 2010 02:16

tides we swam against by catskilt
eunhyuk/donghae
r; 3379 words
donghae says something, and hyukjae hears it.
for midnightcolor because it was her prompt that led to this ♥

Jungsu leaves them on the night of the second day, and finally they are alone. )

g: super junior, #one-shot, p: eunhyuk/donghae, a: catskilt

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notablender April 23 2010, 18:26:28 UTC
WHAT IS THIS SADNESS ;______________;

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catskilt April 24 2010, 03:27:55 UTC
HOW IS THIS SAD. IT HAS THEM SMILING. AND LAUGHING. AND DOING HAPPY THINGS.

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ky_rin April 23 2010, 18:36:08 UTC
But they want to be alone.
lol, ;laksjd daw Jungsu ♥

hyuk is one sneaky pervy bastard, that foot on donghae's crotch. it is like the sexy way or kachau-ing or what.

"Do you really want Jungsu hyung or Heechul hyung looking at us when we have sex?"
*SNORTS*

And then you'll eat my food and you'll be amazed at how well I can cook
I fear for Hyuk's life but a;lskdjas lol

ahhhhh I shall not quote like a quotey thing like I am prone to being but guh, it's been a while since I sat down and read suju properly. I love how you write, direct and with insightful humour, and I love your Hyukjae in all his self-deprecating and fail-at-life (navigator!) glory. I liked little things like Donghae putting his chin on Hyuk's shoulder, the food they ate. What I get out of this is so much quiet faith, so much faith ♥

p.s. dear prissy cho bff, I love you very much. BUT STOP GOING TO BED WHEN I'M NOT LOOKING :||| *CLINGS HARD*

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catskilt April 24 2010, 09:45:06 UTC
I fear for Hyuk's life
That made me snort XDDD So do I. Would not want Donghae near any type of food preparation.

I love your comments, forever and always ♥♥♥ and it's not my fault that you're always not looking when I have to get off! D: *clings back*

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bad_robots April 23 2010, 18:57:36 UTC
SPOT omg why post a fic while I'm at work T_T

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bad_robots April 24 2010, 03:20:53 UTC
This made me tear up, you have no idea. I flash back instantly at those sentimental looks Hae gives Hyuk every now and then when he's in the middle of being happy and smiling and being totally unaware, and vice versa (but it shows up more on Hae's side, IDK why). I love the subtlety of everything and how the reality of their situation despite the distraction of Jeju creeps up to both Hyukjae and Donghae and to us readers as well, making their realizations of wanting to be together for the rest of their life even more stark and painful. But then it's not really a realization, isn't it, since it's something they've both been wanting and denying themselves for so long. I love it, the feeling is relatable, for an idol and anyone, for the matter, struggling to keep up with the real world. Thank you for the gorgeous fic, and ugh, I love your Donghae and Hyukjae SO much. <3

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catskilt April 24 2010, 09:49:47 UTC
lakdsjh I love the way they look at each other. Even if I know that I'm probably tinhatting, I STILL LOVE THE WAY THEY LOOK AT EACH OTHER. And how they can just smile without saying anything, and how they poke and tease and flirt and are generally insanely bff together. Also, you are so right. Hae definitely displays far more affection towards Hyuk than the other way round; probably because he's a naturally affectionate person?

Your thoughtful comment makes me so happy. Thank you ♥♥♥♥

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omg marry me midnightcolor April 23 2010, 19:03:23 UTC
oh. my. god.
i am such a breathless, tearful mess right now...

They feel the strangeness and they think about it, about how beautiful the future sounds for once, and there are tears in Donghae's eyes when he says, "What do you think? Doesn't it sound great?"
"It does," Hyukjae says, "the greatest thing ever." And he wants to say that they shouldn't have done it, it's dangerous to indulge in fantasies, but he can't because he's happier than he's ever been in his life before and there's nothing more that he wants now, nothing but this island and this hour and the feel, the sense, of the potentiality of this beautiful shared future with Donghae.
this was right about the time, i started tearing up :|

Donghae's fingers close around his tightly. "That should be enough, shouldn't it?" he says. "Just that."
It isn't enough, Hyukjae should say. Just loving each other isn't enough. And up till tonight, that's what he's been saying.
But tonight he says, "Yes." Holds onto Donghae's hand until the light turns green. this was around the time i ( ... )

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Re: omg marry me catskilt April 24 2010, 09:52:21 UTC
SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT, BB ♥♥♥

I actually started out with another fic, but I couldn't end it because the fic was so pointless it couldn't be ended. So I scrapped the whole thing and thought about it again and got this one out, which I'm grateful for because it would have bothered me forever if I hadn't, and that's not a good thing when you're in the middle of exams. /rambles

Ugh, this ship will kill me one day. I love HyukHae so much, I don't even know how to express it :|

I WILL MARRY YOU IF YOU WRITE ME HYUKHAE NOW.

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Re: omg marry me midnightcolor April 27 2010, 10:03:56 UTC
DARLING, JUST GIVE ME A PROMPT AND IT WILL BE DONE, I PROMISE YOU ♥

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Re: omg marry me catskilt April 27 2010, 14:19:22 UTC
al;ksjh;flkj okay I'm going to throw out whatever I can think of, and you can choose any or all :D

1) Donghae feels insecure in China without Hyukjae.
2) When fanservice stopped being purely fanservice.
3) They have several other close friends, but ultimately it's always down to them and what they feel for each other is irreplaceable.
4) Donghae is sometimes jealous that Hyukjae and Sungmin have had many more years together than him and Hyukjae. (as you can tell, I kind of love insecure Donghae ;)
5) Hyukjae wants to show Donghae that he loves him just as much, but he doesn't know how because he's never been good with words.
6) He's falling, unknowingly, until he hits bottom.

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na_jin_br April 23 2010, 19:03:42 UTC
It's lovely, melted my heart <3 Really. I wonder why they even try to fool themselves, it's obvious they don't want to let go of each other <3
Thank you for sharing!

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catskilt April 24 2010, 09:53:27 UTC
That's what makes it all the sadder! There will always be a touch of angst and emo in the HyukHae pairing ;__;

Thank you for reading! ♥

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