Shuddering at the unexpected sensation he explodes inside of her, his body shaking as the force of his climax rips through him. She comes seconds later, clenching vice-like around him, and he shudders and buries his face in the hollow where shoulder meets neck as her body spasms beneath him before finally stilling. Never let anybody tell you, that you don't know how to write smut;because*blushes*damnit Jewel you can!And do a very good job of it!
*does a dance* YAY Ryan can have sex with a pillow and it could still be hot... He's hot... and Summer is hot so yeah XD (YAY this now makes me want to finish writing my Supernatural fanfiction that I am writing currently)
I would love you to try and give me feed back on like the actual story also. It's less than 1500 words. (hehehe Fangoria!!!) You are teh best. *dances*
I can definitely give it a shot. You can hit me with the story whenever you're ready. Just email it to jewel21201@yahoo.com and I'll see what I can do. And yes Fangoria, but I'm more terrified and nervous right now than even remotely excited about the trip, lol. I'm so complex.
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