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Ficlet - The O.C. - Guilty Conscience - Chapter 2 (Trey/Seth)

Apr 26, 2010 17:19

Title: Guilty Conscience
Author: Jewel21
Rating: Hard R for sexual situations
Show: The O.C.
Genre: Angst/Slash
Pairing: Seth/Trey
Type: WIP
Summary: An unforeseeable event sends Trey and Seth back to Orange County.

A/N: This story contains slash. If you are offended by such pairings, please don't read. This story also follows after my series ‘ ( Read more... )

fanfic: o.c.

Comments 5

matchsticks_p April 27 2010, 05:36:45 UTC

I wasn't sold on the storyline at first, but now you have me hooked. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, and hopefully to more Trey/Seth interactions. :)

jewel21 April 27 2010, 21:57:27 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. There are three more chapters and there will be some more Trey/Seth interactions :)

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jewel21 April 27 2010, 23:04:45 UTC

Thanks so much for reading!

dogsbody01 May 27 2010, 18:20:14 UTC

Good chapter.I think, that I kind of understand,where Trey is at;this was somebody, who may have given birth to him,raised him in a quite haphazard and dysfunctional manner;and who in a fashion,had loved him and that he had been able to love somewhat.But who was, also an exetremely toxic woman,who did both Trey and Ryan, a great deal of harm;when they were children and later teenagers.You have Trey, wanting to grieve for Dawn and to be able to remember her;when she could be a better person.But being too terrified of doing so,because it might mean losing his grip.
Hopefully Seth,will be able to understand this.By the way, I'm loving both the tension and awkwardness, with our boys.
I'm looking forward to chapter three.

jewel21 May 30 2010, 23:01:56 UTC

I love that you completely understand Trey's feelings. Everything you said is just spot on.

Thanks again for the lovely review!

Jewel