take it off let me show, Skrtel/Agger, NC17

[jetaimais]

take it off let me show
NC17. Skrtel/Agger + Kelly. (LFC RPS)
pwp, alcohol, language, voyeurism, exhibitionism, rough sex, minor D/s
~3,900 words
sequel to turn the lights down low

Comments

[lilredlfc]

Possessive!Martin and asshole!Daniel are my favorite. But you already knew that. I mostly live blogged reading this to you but the two things I wasn't able to send to you were:

It won’t feel nearly as nice, but Daniel doesn't want to feel Martin’s come in his ass when they’re supposed to be socializing.

I love the trust in each other that this shows they have.

My other thing was less of one line and more the whole thing. I love much they trust, love, and respect each other and how you can see this is a real relationship that they both want to work even though they know it isn't going to be close to easy.

Another thing I love is your Kels. So often he's portrayed as being childish and whiny so I love that your's is a little bit more mature without being totally mature and totally adult. Because 18-23 is about becoming a real adult and that's the stage he's in so that is how he would act.

Finally you are flawless and I can not wait for more. :D

[jetaimais]

I really just want to roll you up in a blanket and hold onto you forever. Really. That's all there is to say.

[lilredlfc]

[gingermad]

Daniel and Martin ...... I love the way they look for, to love, to look .... is as if they are always connected to each other .... even when they are silent, they are talking ...
Kelli scares me .... I'm always afraid that he ruined their love .... -.-

kiss

[jetaimais]

Thank you!

[acrayonsmile]

I fucking love you. Can I friend you? Because WOW. This was so hot. I love that Kels keeps watching them. I love that they're in Pepe's guest room. I love that they're just so sexy together.

[jetaimais]

Oh! That would be awesome! I like making friends. :D

Thank you fore the comment and I'm hella glad you enjoyed! ♥

[vicky86x]

Okay, so far you've written Kelly as a voyeur, Martin rimming Daniel and now there is Daniel riding Martin! Fucking hell, it's like you know exactly how to make me really happy ;)

This was awesome, just like turn the lights down low! This universe is amazing! Martin and Daniel are just so perfect and the smut is so hot! And I love the possessiveness! I seriously can't get enough of it!

And I love Daniel's train of thoughts, the way he thinks about Martin and Kelly, it's amazing

I really hope there is more from you and those three! :D

I think the only thing that is missing and that would make me even happier would be those two in a shower ;) Just saying, of course :P

[jetaimais]

I'm kind of shameless and have a horrible enabler *coughlilredlfccough*. I'm really glad you enjoyed and thank you for commenting! :D

Oh, hello, there is an idea if I've ever heard one. Wet boys. Perfect.

[elf_md]

I just don't know where to start.

I think the most epic detail is that Daniel casually thinks everyone would be alright with them disappearing for a quickie. I don't even know why I thought that was so epic.

Kelly's cheeky side is a thing of beauty. Also that watching is no issue, for any of them, but that touching is a hurdle they're not recklessly taking.

Daniel is wonderfully possessive. I can't wait to see his reaction when Martin and Kelly touch at some point or another. It feels to me he would have different standard for who gets to touch who, and I love it.

You are writing the most amazing smut, and yet it's all about feelings. Wonderful stuff!

[jetaimais]

This makes me all flail happy and makes up for being down with the flu. Just. Yes. It's perfect. Thank you so much and I'm glad you enjoyed. ♥

I have a lot of feelings and will probably not stop ever. So um. Yes. Daniel and Martin and Kelly are fucking flawless.