Torchwood Fic:

[jesuisscientist]

Title: Repeat
Author: jesuisscientist
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Ianto, Ianto/Lisa
Rating: PG, for some language. 
Summary: Ianto discovers a few flaws shortly after coming to Cardiff. 
Disclaimer: Don't own them, just borrowing from RTD/BBC.

A/N: I've been writing Torchwood fic for a while but I've basically never posted anything. I'm not exactly sure

Comments

[usakiwigirl]

Very nice. Any chance of continuing? I like this train of thought process that Ianto is going through. I'd like to see some more of his musings, maybe as he manages to bring in Lisa, as he works on her while dealing with the team, even after it all goes to hell. You have a nice way with words. Keep it up!

Oh yeah, and don't be afraid to post, we don't bite - well, not unless you ask us to *leers*

[jesuisscientist]

Thanks, I'll try and write more sometime :)

[toshiani007]

It was interesting so far, keep writing!!! *-*

[jesuisscientist]

Thanks, will try :)

[lilferret]

Loving this so far. One tiny thing though: try to watch the tense changing. It started in past tense and switched to present tense at the end. But the plot is great, and your characterisation is spot on. Definitely want to read more!

[jesuisscientist]

Ah, thanks for pointing that out. I was having the hardest time keeping it in the same tense, which isn't a problem I normally have. I'll go and fix that. :)

[badly_knitted]

Definitely like this so far - I'm hoping that the comments you're getting will persuade you to continue, I'd love ro see where you'll take it.

[jesuisscientist]

Thanks - I just started writing the next part, actually. I was persuaded. :)

[badly_knitted]

Wonderful! I'll look forward to reading it =)

[punkchick1995]

this is just... gah! pure brilliance :) xx

[jesuisscientist]

Thanks for reading! :)