the syntax of the king, the queen and the prince ►the malfoys

[jesuisfortis]

title: royalty doesn’t do funerals
characters: draco, narcissa, lucius (harry potter)
word count: 2.938 words
warnings: post-war
summary: the malfoy household is drinking sorrow tonight.

Comments

[dexstarr]

Holy Merlin. I don't know what to say.

I loved this. The style, the definitions, the thoughts of each character ... just great.

[jesuisfortis]

you have no idea of what this comment meant to me ;~; thank you, thank you, just. thank you so much, this means a lot ♥

[zireael07]

Wow. Brilliant! I'm speechless...

[jesuisfortis]

thank youuuuu~ ♥

[diabolica]

This was a true delight to read. You've captured the Malfoys post-war in all their arrogance, indecision and love. I really adored this fic.

[jesuisfortis]

okay, so that's one of these comments that i'll just reread a thousand times just to make sure they really are directed towards a fic i wrote.

thank you so. much. ♥

[lauypauy]

wow, this is amazing. the definitions are so good, especially the one about adult not being the same as mature and pureblood being a blessing and a curse. also how their names are never used, except by each other XD

[jesuisfortis]

thank you so much. there are a couple of comments that really make you get your chin up again, and this is one of them. thank you.

[gilly_sirl]

Very clever and very well observed!

[jesuisfortis]

thank you so much ♥