already caught in a trap ► chapter one

[jesuisfortis]

title: one man army
characters: draco/harry (harry potter)
word count: 4,044 words
warnings: this is the first chapter. for prologue, go here. if you like the premise, feel free to friend me for updates.
summary: a handshake that comes before anything else might be a valuable enough start for a friendship.

Comments

[guardiancastiel]

Oh gosh, this is so intriguing! And again your writing style is delicious and different. Can't wait to see how this goes(:

[jesuisfortis]

fsdklfjds thank you so much! ♥___♥ i'll update it as soon as i can! tyty

[jesuisfortis]

thank youuuuuuuuuu! i'm writing already the second chapter so it'll be updated as soon as possible ♥

[maurice]

Interesting writing style. It's what first struck me of this fic and makes it quite original, at least in my opinion. I also like your characterization. I'm already fond of your Pansy, I find her intriguing.
I'm looking forward to see what will happen from now on.

[jesuisfortis]

thank you so much! i hope i can keep it interesting :3 (will update as soon as possible, am on my way with chapter 2 already!)

[guardiancastiel]

I was actually gna come back and comment about her Pansy (never paid attention to her much but I definately like when she's written well)

[maurice]

yes, she's one of those secondary characters I didn't give a damn, until some fanwriter made me see their potential.

[thrnbrooke]

Wow!!!! What happens next?

[jesuisfortis]

thanks for the comment! i'll soon update :)