Half a Stranger: Chapter Eight: Flat View of Things

[jesterlady]

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Half a Stranger

[boskone86]

This is a very good story and I am enjoying it. Many nice touches. I like it that veronica is fighting vampires and has Buffy's strength and slayer skills. Funny when veronica is checking Buffy's closet I think a little more could be done with the girls reaction to their new wardrobe. NIce Touch with Giles and BUffy growing closer and more honest. LOL with Logan tkaing the bus and saying next time he will call in a helocoper! You do Spike very well.
For me I think a little more is needed with BUffy in Veronica's body and at school. Also, what do they think of each other's looks?

Re: Half a Stranger

[jesterlady]

Thank you. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and like the specifics. You certainly think of everything! Thanks for the comment.

Re: Half a Stranger

[boskone86]

I just noticed you had finishe the story. Thznks, I enjoyed it! Its very well written and the contrasting worlds of veronica and Buffy were very well handled. I like what Logan says to Veronica at the end - that she should trust him moe and that with her help he would do better.
I noticed you used some of my suggestions about clothes in the story.
One hting I am curious about were either of the girls tempted to maybe stay were theey were? Like Buffying wanting to be normal or Veroniv wanting to be the suber strong slayer? All the best.

Re: Half a Stranger

[jesterlady]

I'm so glad you liked it! I'm glad I could make it more like you wanted.
I think it probably would be a thought that would cross through their heads. But most likely, I think it would pass. Thanks for reading.

[jaya_solo]

Oh I'm loving it. I hate Glory, she's just awful. I'm both eager and sad that I'm coming up to the end of the story. I suppose that means you'll just have to write more stories ;)

[jesterlady]

Glory was rather awful in her own way. Hey, thanks!