Comments | jessm78: FIC: Unexpected Souvenir (PG-13, S/D), Part 2

jessm78

FIC: Unexpected Souvenir (PG-13, S/D), Part 2

Jul 09, 2007 19:06

Here's part 2. Again, feedback appreciated. :)

Bending to lace up her boots, Sam sighed. They'd just returned from the first mission after the curious events on the Odyssey, and she was exhausted. It was a fairly basic reconnaissance mission, but it involved scaling some rough terrain to reach the abandoned city. After almost twelve hours, it'd ( Read more... )

fanfic, stargate: sg-1: sam, stargate: sg-1: daniel, stargate: sg-1: cam, stargate: sg-1: teal'c, stargate: sg-1: vala, stargate

Comments 13

anglstrmoon July 10 2007, 00:14:28 UTC

Well, it was worth the wait! It was really good! A bit sad at the beginning, but it got better! Thanks for sharing!

jessm78 July 10 2007, 00:23:47 UTC

Aw, thanks, I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, the overall depressing feeling at the beginning was me channeling my feelings over Unending. It just peeved me to see Sam spending most of her time alone (and not interacting much with Daniel). I couldn't go without a happy ending though!

Thanks again! :)

chris4short July 10 2007, 03:37:55 UTC

Personally, I'm partial to Orlando Bloom (and his character, of course) but seeing it's Vala we are talking about... Johnny it is!

Ah lovely! 3wks and engaged... next 6wks married... 9wks and sporting the baby! Love it! Nice to know that this timeline is something she would not change for the world... why would she? She has Daniel! (and his hot bod...)

jessm78 July 10 2007, 22:41:37 UTC

Teehee... I am with you there. ;) I can totally see Vala going after Jack Sparrow... the treasures...the attitude... the rum. Um... the rum? Heh - why not? ;)

Now I like those ideas. Yes we've found a totally acceptable timeline - it works!! And Daniel's hot bod is a nice plus too......

Oh yeah!

annikamalfoy July 11 2007, 20:58:39 UTC

I also prefer Orlando/ Will, but I can see Vala being partial to Johnny/ Jack. He's a pirate and she's kind of a pirate too. Or she was until she joined SG1.

And yes Daniel's hot bod is definitely a plus... ::sighs in contentment::

jessm78 July 12 2007, 02:48:56 UTC

Yep, that's exactly what I was going for.

Indubitably. :)

jedisam July 11 2007, 02:03:18 UTC

That was so sweet! I'm new to this community, but i can see I'm going to like it after that intro! very nicely done!

jessm78 July 11 2007, 02:48:50 UTC

Aw, thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. :) And welcome to the community!

annikamalfoy July 11 2007, 20:54:31 UTC

Jess, I love you. Do you know that? ::grin:: Lovely S/D with the possibility of Tala'c or Cam/Vala. ::sighs::

jessm78 July 12 2007, 02:47:54 UTC

Yes, I know that. But I don't mind you saying it again. *grin* I'm really glad that you liked it. :)

vixen_logic July 11 2007, 21:10:50 UTC

jessm78 July 12 2007, 02:49:23 UTC

*hugs* Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. :)