Hey! Say! JUMP Solves A Mystery - Chapter 9 + Epilogue [COMPLETED]

Mar 21, 2011 10:07

Hey, guys! ^^
It's hard for me to believe that I'm posting the end to this fanfic, but guess what, Hey! Say! JUMP has finally solved the mystery! :D 
However, it's not the end yet! Over Spring Break, my sister and I have been plotting out the second Oretachi no Kizuna, so be sure to be on the lookout for that when I start posting it! The other ( Read more... )

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matsujun19 March 21 2011, 14:25:05 UTC
spot?? LOL
Jessica-chan~!!! Hisahiburi.....
i've stop reading at the 4th chap...need to go back and read it now!

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jessicaluthien March 23 2011, 13:37:57 UTC
Hey, Yuuki-chan! ^^ It's okay, take your time! I hope you like reading the rest of it!

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ayang902 March 22 2011, 00:50:00 UTC
awww so they were the ones that did it... but i wish they weren't!! ><
hehe that's a really cute picture! i like the "friendship" hahhaa xDD
i like how you included the 2 newer members in, but that just reminds me of how the "boys" were taken out of NYC.. =___=
awwww daiki's still so cute, up to the end! X3 *daichii! SPOT*
i DID enjoy reading this! but i cant belive its done!! >< *wants more of your writing* lol xDD
nice job, jessica-chan!! thanks for sharing this amazing fic~ ^^

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jessicaluthien March 23 2011, 13:42:48 UTC
I know what you mean! When I was planning this story, I had internal struggles about B.I.Shadow's involvement with the murder too! X___X
Me too! I think it's a really cute picture of B.I.Shadow! ^^ I had to manipulate the picture a bit, though...Originally Nakayama Yuma was at the bottom of the picture but I cropped the pic and blocked out the top of his hair. XD
Yeeaaahh...That still made me a little sad. :( However, this means that they can debut again by themselves and hopefully get their own fame. I have a feeling that if they stuck with NYC boys, they'd be in N,Y, and C's shadow...FOREVER! >.>
Yups! I really do enjoy writing in "Daiki". It's just going to be sad to have less of him in the next Oretachi. HSJ are still going to play a rather large part, but they're still not the major characters. :(
Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it! <3 I will need to write a lot more before posting anything. (Although I'm working on the Takaki/Yabu fic so that I make it in time for Takaki's birthday, which is coming up! :D) I was a little ( ... )

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ayang902 March 24 2011, 22:58:05 UTC
yeahh they seemed so inoocent (HAHAHA thats a funny typing mistake) yet guilty... :(
lol you cut him out... xDD aww thats true.. i feel bad for them either way ><
awww its okay, dai-chan can still be super fun when u do get to write him! :3
heheee yays!! ^^ uwaahh i just realized, i should post the scandalous takayama chapter for my fic on yuya's birthday! x3 yush! i will! *decided* yays so we can both wait and anticipate together! :]
*nods* its all about trying different experiences through writing, ne? :) i feel like ive learned a lot, even from just writing these kinda pointless romance stories... xDD

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jessicaluthien March 26 2011, 14:11:52 UTC
Hahaha That IS a funny typing mistake! It's OK, I'm sure Inoo will forgive you!
Yups! And I was like, "And then Nakayuma DISAPPEARS!" lol
True! I think I'll enjoying writing the Dai-chan parts! :)
Ohhhh...I'm excited! Scandalous Takayama time! jk We'll both put up new stuff on Yuya's birthday! XD
Awww...Pointless romance stories? Don't be so hard on yourself! They're definitely fun to read! ^^ But yeah, writing only improves with more practice, so it's good that we keep going at it!

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columbin3 March 22 2011, 01:30:01 UTC
in general, awesome!!!!
I LOVE IT!
and this altered my view of why Misaki ended up leaving BiShandow.
I won't wonder if later, someone asked me "why do you think Misaki left the group?" and I would answer, "because they accidentally killed a director!"
I won't stop laughing at that person's shocked face, seriously.

I really enjoyed reading this.
So lovely!
This has called me back to my roots, to the suspense/thrill genre of literature!!
Otsukare!
I hope you'll write more of this kind of story.

Omedetou for finishing a good fan fiction! (^_^)/

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jessicaluthien March 23 2011, 13:47:25 UTC
LOL I think if you answered that Misaki left the group because he murdered somebody, you would scare the heck out of that person! Yay for writing alternate histories! XD
I'm glad that you liked it so much! Thank you for always reading my work! I'm so glad that I finally plucked up the courage to comment on that Yuto Birthday Post all those months ago! ^^ It's interesting to see that I happen to write in genres you like! I'm going to begin work on Oretachi 2 soon, so that'll be exciting! :D Oretachi 2 is going to have a lot more characters, since I'm including Shintaro, Nakayama Yuma, HSJ, B.I.Shadow, and Kis-My-Ft2. The storylines (Yes, there are multiple storylines) are going to be more intense also. So look forward to it! XD

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columbin3 March 27 2011, 11:21:15 UTC
hahah!
right. the person will say, 'how did you know such thing?'
and I will answer her/him, 'through a fan fiction!'
'wtheck!!'
hahaha! XD

ohhh, that's nice!
I'll look forward for Oretachi 2! Yey!!

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c00kie_m0nster7 March 25 2011, 05:31:56 UTC
uwaaaaaaahhh~! ur finally done~!!! subarashi~!! i knew it it was b.i shadow~!!! awww it's like how dai-chan really felt about NYC (=^=)anyway nyahhah the last chapter was all about dai-chan well speakinG~! :3

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jessicaluthien March 26 2011, 14:13:18 UTC
Yups! The last chapter has a lot of Dai-chan in it! XD I was really glad that I was able to write the entire story from his point of view!
Thank you for reading! ^^ I"m really glad that you've read up to now and that you liked it!

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nayami12 March 25 2011, 11:46:10 UTC
sugoi ne Jessica-chan~ gifted writer~ sugoi ne!!~

i hope you write more fanficuus about Chii and Ryu~ they are my ichiban in Hey!Say!JUMP ^///^ <3
arigatou for this amazing fanficuu!!~

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jessicaluthien March 26 2011, 14:15:03 UTC
Aww....Thank you for the compliment and for reading! ^^ I'm glad that you liked it!
Hmm...I might in the future...But right now, I have a lot of projects already on my plate! XD Maybe once I'm done with all of those! :)

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