Fic: Unknown Feeling - Part II (Enchanted)

[jezzibella]

Title: Some Unknown Feeling - Part II
Rating: M
Word Count: 2,434
Pairing (if any): Robert/Giselle
Disclaimer: These are not my characters. They are creations of Disney.
A/N: So, I’ve finally finished this little piece. Getting it typed wasn’t too bad. I found more issues in revising it. The encouragement from the reviews pushed me to keep

Comments

[shalia74]

wow...That was hot...And sweet at the same time...Great job. :)

Can't wait for the next part

[jezzibella]

I'm not 100% sure if I'm going to make a Part III or not. I'm thinking about it, since most people have liked this story, thus far.

Thanks for the comment!

[jewel_2]

Wow that was better then any romantic novel. I would love to know what happens next and what the "more" entails.

[jezzibella]

Thanks for the comment! Glad you enjoyed it! (:

[doreah]

I like the clumsiness of the encounter at first. It's quite a minor detail but I think it brings that much more realism to it. I'm sure it would be awkward. And when she cried! OH! I was worried!

My favourite part has to be the "There's more?" part hehehe.

Anyway! Great follow-up! Muchly enjoyed. :D

PS. I also like the word "apex" lol. Dunno why, but well used! ;)

[jezzibella]

I actually thought about removing 'apex', but I guess I'm glad I left it in? Ha ha

Thanks for the review, lovie! :D

[op_de_radio]

Oh my word...there's more?!

That was definitely HOT, like to the max. I do hope that there will be a part III, I too would love to see what the more entails.

[jezzibella]

Haha. I'm not sure if there will be a Part III or not. It took a lot out of me to write this, for whatever reason.

I'm quite glad you enjoyed it though! :)

[boundpages]

Oh please, you have to write a third part! I loved it.