Oh, the idea that the Doctor should have come BEFORE, and hadn't, was so very painful! I just loved the way you handled that-how quietly broken she seemed, how she would not blame him, although he knew she thought it, and his own desperation and guilt. That was so very moving, the emotions extremely vivid for both of them. I really liked the moment when River turned away from his-heart-wrenching again-and then his relief as she reached for his hand, and pulled him along with her to their room. The undressing was beautifully described, and the kissing and consequent smut were just stunning. I LOVED the way you described the taste of River, and also the moment when he had to admit to himself, however briefly, that there was a certain high in seeing her so broken and being the one to hold her and make her better. The bed sounded just amazing-like a forest!-and I loved the way they nestled there, it sounded so warm and intimate, like they were wrapped in their little bubble and utterly away from the world. It was wonderfully fitting that
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