In Sanity

Jun 11, 2010 20:29


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starling_1 July 1 2010, 23:06:07 UTC
ohhhh....I want to live in your world...the STUFF and the light and the emotion and everything!

Quentin and Mila rub against each other like sandpaper, but Mila seems to be good for Quention, who should not be sitting around remembering how she wanted to be a pirate. Or...maybe she should. A little looting might be good for her.

I am completely intrigued by the last shot, which is freaking incredible! I love this story!

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jerzibot July 9 2010, 00:02:43 UTC
I cordially invite you into my realm of existence. Try not to mind all the clutter.

They're definitely contrasting characters. Though, they can also be incredibly similar in some ways. Mila and Quentin are definitely some type of dysfunctional dynamic duo. They need each other for different things. Maybe Captain Quentin shall go on a looting spree.

Ooh, thank you. I had a major debate about whether or not to include it.=D

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collidingwithme July 4 2010, 12:00:21 UTC
*smacks forehead* I bookmarked this on my laptop, which I used mostly for school related stuff only and didn't see it until I checked SWG. X(

Awesome, awesome writing! (I got a feeling I'll be repeating this in future, lol.) I loved the conversation between Quentin and Mila. I'm so glad that they turned out to be such good friends, to the point that they would move out and live together (though that might be something forced from circumstances). I also like how you present different perspectives about the same thing, and that last part about Quentin and her overactive imagination. :) Hehe, I think I'm rambling already.

Also, I LOVE your clutter. 8D

AND YES, before I forget: Who's lips were those in the last picture? I can't make out much of the background, but those lips are not Quentin or Mila's right? A new character? :S

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jerzibot July 9 2010, 00:08:42 UTC
Haha, well, I guess what matters is that you eventually found it.

Thank you, thank you - I got a feeling I'll be repeating that in the future! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Every time I write I'm worried its too conversation based, which it probably is, but at least its working - for now. Perhaps their decision to be denizens of the same apartment is from friendship, circumstance, or maybe a combination. Whatever led them to reside together, isn't terribly important, it was a good thing for Quentin (and her overactive imagination).

Rambling is all good in my books. I enjoy reading rambles.

Clutter is possibly my favorite type of decoration. xD

For the sake of drama and interest, I'll leave that one up to you to figure out for now.

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