I'm loving this series. It brings back to mind so much of a book I love but haven't read for a few years. Indeed, there are so many turning points in all our lives that we've no idea of.
Two small typos in the first paragraph, if you don't mind having them pointed out: "then finally given new/old clothes" needs to be "been given"; and I do think the Roknari have done enough to warp Caz, and he'd be more likely to wrap himself in the blanket. I've no gift for fiction, so please accept the comments as part of my thanks for your sharing your creations.
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Two small typos in the first paragraph, if you don't mind having them pointed out: "then finally given new/old clothes" needs to be "been given"; and I do think the Roknari have done enough to warp Caz, and he'd be more likely to wrap himself in the blanket. I've no gift for fiction, so please accept the comments as part of my thanks for your sharing your creations.
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Thank you for writing these.
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