As I said earlier I love the way you explained how Terinu used bion to bring the ferin doe back. And lots of little details: Terinu calling down Nan and Dr. Pouncer, how he knew that the other ferin would be milling around at this early hour anxious to know about the new doe, the bion insulated operating room and the little doe's reaction to discovering the mythical First One is real.
Thank you. Again looking forward to what you have in store next.
I still do not see why they need as close a connection as possible when she wakes up...
mjkj
PS: suspected typo: "Vix, step out of the doe's line of sight, please," the First One muttered softly to her. Nan took up position at the head of the operating table, where the little doe could see her. => from the context I would say the last part should read: where the little doe could not see her.
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Thank you. Again looking forward to what you have in store next.
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I still do not see why they need as close a connection as possible when she wakes up...
mjkj
PS: suspected typo:
"Vix, step out of the doe's line of sight, please," the First One muttered softly to her. Nan took up position at the head of the operating table, where the little doe could see her. => from the context I would say the last part should read: where the little doe could not see her.
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