Fic: Altered Trajectory (cont.)

[jeriendhal]

Comments

[aynne_witch]

Hey Mac! **Poke in the Eye** hehehehehehehe

[jeriendhal]

Don't we enough vulpines with replacement cybernetics? ;p

[mehhayperson]

I'm honestly not even sure what you're trying to say here:

“Perhaps not, but it is great fun. Besides, since I’m a Farm Noble and on as mission that’s independent of his responsibilities as Ship’s Security Officer. Once we left the what little authority he had over our actions disappeared.”

Okay, that was an exaggeration, but there are some pretty glaring errors here - also in a paragraph soon after - that do make it more difficult to read.

Apart from that; oooh exciting! Are they going to get into Trouble? :D

[jeriendhal]

sighs dramatically. I'll fix em up, thanks for pointing them out before Michael did.

When doesn't alt-Rufus get into trouble? :)

[tamhavik]

That's so weird... seeing another character with the same name as one of your own, but being completly different! If I hadn't already realised Willy is actually a male name in English, this would have been even weirder!

Still, I couldn't help myself... I pictured this scene with my Willy in the role of you Willy. *grins*

[jeriendhal]

I think your Willy will have a fine career as a used car salesperson when she grows up. ;p