Dragon Mom: Questions of Jurisdiction

[jeriendhal]

I had some free time and was feeling silly. I do think this story is getting overcomplicated though

Comments

[seawasp]

HEY! You can't build up to a confrontation like that and do it all off-stage!

[jeriendhal]

You may now be getting a hint as to why I've never been professionally published. (aside from my craptacular grammar)

More seriously, I'll get back to the confrontation between Mom and the fairy as soon as I figure out what actually happened...

[seawasp]

I haven't noticed any particular grammar issues; readability of your stuff seems perfectly good.

But yeah, you have to show awesome things like confrontations.

[ankewehner]

Have a cookie! You used "lay" correctly! :D

[harvey_rrit]

I do like these pieces.

I have maintained for decades now that a dragon who saw Siegfried would be surprised to find an opera with a happy ending.

Seriously. Somebody robs and murders a neighbor in a home invasion, and justice finally prevails.